[Mr K Viper]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA World Champion: AJ Styles [/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA Global Champion: Eric Young[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA World Tag Champions: British Invasion (Brutus Magnus & Doug Williams)[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA X Division Champion: Amazing Red[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA Knockouts Champion: ODB[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]TNA Woman's Tag Champions: Sarita &Taylor Wilde[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Abdul Bashir[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Abyss[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Alex Shelley[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Alissa Flash[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Awesome Kong[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Bobby Lashley[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Chris Sabin[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Christ Hemme[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Cody Deaner[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Consequences[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Daffney[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]D'Angelo Dinero[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Daniels[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Desmon Wolfe[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Dr. Stevie[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Hamada[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Hernendez[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Homicide[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Hulk Hogan[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]James Storm[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Jay Lethal[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Jeff Jarret[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Jesse Neal[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Kevin Nash[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Kip James[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Kiyoshi[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Kurt Angle[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Lacey Von Erich[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Lauren[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Madison Rayne[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Matt Morgan[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Mick Foley[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Rhyno[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Rob Terry[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Robert Roode[/size][/font]

[size="3"][font="Times New Roman"]Samoa Joe[/font][/size]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Scott Steiner[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Shark Boy[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]SoCal Val[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Sting[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Suicide[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Tara[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Taz[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Brother Ray[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Brother Devon[/size][/font]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Traci Brooks[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]Exactly one day after the PPV Turning point Kevin RW Smith Took over TNA Wrestling. He announced that all Storylines are now OVER and this is a new start for TNA. HE announced that Dixie Carter will remain in the company as an advisor only. Hulk Hogan has a very good relationship with the young wealthy man but will only feature a hanfull of time and mostly in a Non-Wrestling Role. All stars have received new contracts Except Jeff Jerret who left the company after a bust up with Mr Smith.[/size][/font]

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[font="Times New Roman"][size="3"]The November 19[sup]th[/sup] episode of Impact will be a new start for TNA[/size][/font]

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(ooc- Sorry about no Graphics my PC is Bad and feel free to say what you want about my writing I will try to improve also I am new to this so please help anyway you can thank you)

This post has been edited by Mr K Viper: 17 November 2009 - 01:07 AM

[Rusty3:16]

you shouldn't have cancelled all storylines,
in my opinion this wont go down well..
in an assumption (that may well be wrong) you will now build storylines with people too give yourself good match/show ratings rather than a good diary,
very early assumptions so go on and prove me wrong, that would make me happy! (:

[Mr K Viper]

[center]iIMPACT 19/11/09[/center]


The show Kicks off with pyro and music as Taz and Mike Tenay welcomes Everyone to a new TNA, A fresh TNA, a Better TNA. Taz Mentions how we will have the TNA champ AJ Styles in Non-Title Contest against Matt Morgan, Mr.Smith has an Announcement to make regardiing Eric Young and the Global title and also Dr. Stevie Fights Abyss again for his job. As they finnish talking The British Invasions Music hits.

James Storm(With Bobby Rhoode/Chris Harris) D. Rob Terry(With The British Invasion)
Crowd went mad when Harris apeared to even the odds for Beermoney. Terry started Strong but Storm got the better of him. Williams attacked Rhoode but Harris saved him. The Match went back and forth with Storm looking the stronger of the two. the ref Destracted by the fight going on outside allowed for Storm to smash a bottle over Terry's head and then hit [size="2"]The Eight Second Ride to pick up the win.
[/size]WINNER: James Storm

"An Invasion In Turmoil"
After the match Eric Young came to the ring and slaped Terry across the face. The Invasion started yelling at him untill he snaped attacking Eric Young. Williams and Magnus took him down and started beating him down untill Chris Harris and Beermoney came down for the save.

Interview JB and Abyss
JB points out that tonight might be his last night wearing his mask. Abyss Confussed asks why in which JB replies that Mr.Smith has made it that his match against Dr.Stevie will Be Mask Vs Job

Kevin Nash And Scott Steiner Vs Desmond Wolfe and Rhyno
TNA have at last stoped this stupid Rhyno storyline and teamed him with a young Up and comer. Everyone expected Nash and Steiner to win easily but that was far from the truth. steiner was beat on quite bad before he made the tag to Nash who cleared house he almost got the win over Rhyno but he got the tag to Wolfe who got Big Sexy to his Knees before hiting that WolfCall(his powerfull Closeline) for the win.
WINNER: Wolfe & Rhyno

Interview
Dr. Stevie tells JB that he has a trick up his sleeve tonight and he wont be fired tonight. he also says that Foley is no longer with shareholder with TNA and he wants a NO-DQ match next PPV against him!

"Get every Angle?"
Angle is backstage looking as if he is nursing his neck when he bumps into AJ Styles he is quick to mention to AJ that he wants a Title shot and he deserves one! They get face to Face before Samoa Joe interupts saying he is the most dominent force here and should be champ as he was cheated on sunday. Mr. smith interupts and tells them that there will be a tournament to decide who will face AJ at Final Resolution. all 3 men are shocked as Mr.Smith walks away.

Dr. Stevie(With Daffney) Vs Abyss(With ???)
A Strange man wearing a all red stood at ring side watching the match. Abyss Dominated most of the match it looked like a squashuntill Daffney destracted the ref just as THE SANDMAN slid in the ring and whacked Abyss with his cane several times before sliding out again. Stevie pinned for the win.

"The Unmasking"
Stevie Holds Abyss as Sandman removed his mask. Abyss was helpless Sandman beat him with his Caine. They are still beating him as Security split it up. the man in red just looked on.

"Not so Global Champion"
The world Elite are gatered in the ring to hear Mr. smith's announcement. He tells Eric young that he has found a Foreign challanger for his global title and that he will defend it at final Revolution in Canada! EY is stunned and as if its not bad enough he tells them that next week that it will be the World Elite(young/Williams/Magnus/Bashir) Vs James Storm/Bobby Rhoode/Chris Harris and Rob Terry.

X-Division Title Match: Amazing Red Vs Chris Sabin Vs Alex Shelley Vs Jay Lethal Vs Kiyoshi Vs Homicide Vs SUICIDE
This match was a High paced one with every man having there moments in the match. Sabin and Shelley took out Lethal and Kiyoshi. homicide almost won with a Modified DDT but SUICIDE broke up the pin. Homicide nearly unmasked SUICIDE but he got away Amazing Red used the Destraction to roll him up for the pin. all hell broke lose after the match with all the men still fighting.
Winner: Amazing Red (And Still X-Division Champion)

"The Tournament made official"
A promo announcing that it will be Joe vs Morgan and STING vs Hernandez next week and Angle Vs Desmon Wolfe and A Lucky Draw match to decide the next two Wrestlers.

"Blueprint Thats it"
New backstage announcer Jordan Murdoch is with Matt Morgan whoo is extremely happy with him being in the Number one Contender tournament and he is planning on winning and he will show styles what he will be up against TONIGHT because when you face the Blueprint THATS IT!!!.

Aj Styles Vs Matt Morgan
Decent Match Styles started good but morgan beat him down alot. Morgan almost gpot the win after a Big Boot but styles kicked out. Morgan Continued to beat Styles untill AJ hit him with a dropkick out of nowhere. he went to the top rope but was Attacked By Joe!!!!! who beat down both Styles and Morgan before grabing the Mic and Announcing that anyone who gets in his way will recieve the same punishment.
Winner: No-Contest

Show End

[Mr K Viper]

TNA Rumors..

HULK HOGAN A CHANGED MAN?
Sources within TNA have revealed that the Hulkster was Amazed by the stars of the X-Division and one star espicially caught his eye and its sayed that he will job to this person in 2 Weeks on Impact(In the World Title Tournament)

Brother Devon Sidelined
Brother Devon will be out for up to 6 months with a yet to be revealed Injury.

Internet TNA show?
YNA have confirmed that in 2 weeks the first ever TNA CyberHeat Wrestling will be available to watch on Saturday.

[Mr K Viper]

[center]iIMPACT 26/11/09[/center]

Taz and Tenay open the show in ussual fashion. Hyping the World Title #1 contender Tourny later that night. Fotage is shown of Samoa joe Ambushing AJ Styles and Matt Morgan last week as taz reminds everyone that morgan will out for blood tonight.

Lethal Consequences Vs Kevin Nash
These two where fed to the wolfs as Nash destroyed them with his power. Lethal got hurt mid match. Nash hit the jackhammer for the win on Consequences,
WINNER:Kevin Nash

"I am the man"
Nash grabs a mic and starts running down a list of names he has beaten since comming to TNA and how he cant understand why he isnt in the #1 Contender Tourny and he will beat anyone to prove TNA what there missing. Kip James Music hit as he appeared on stage he tells nash he is Nothing and that he should retire and save his dignaty Nash Challanges Kip to a match. Kip says he will meet Nash at Final Resolution in a Loser Leaves town match!

"Enter Sandman"
Raven is standing in his cold lockeroom with sandman and Dr.Stevie He tells Stevie and sandman to take the Tag team division by storm leave Abyss to him. Raven:"Sandmanthis is your show go on and steal it" Stevie looks disgusted with the favourites.

Dr.Stevie/Sandman Vs Rhyno/Foley
Foley returned in this match it went back and forth Stevie taking alot of beat down. Foley hit a piledriver on Stevie but sandman got to foley before the pin. Rhyno Gore'd Sandman and almost got the win. Sandman hit a sortof ddt looking move on Rhyno for the win.
Winners: Raven's Flock

"Unleashed"
Abyss Arrived on the stage with a mic he thanked Stevie from freeing him from the mask but he didnt enjoy the beating he got and he wants Raven. just as he turns around Raven hits him with a sledgehammer. Raven stands over a KO'd Abyss.

"The Draw"
Mr. Smith is in the ring he Announces that next week the 4th Quaterfinal will be Chris Sabin Vs Hulk Hogan.

#1 Contender Tourn:QF1-Sting Vs Hernendez
Sting got big pop. Match was open untillthe fans really got on stings side and Super mex just got beat down. Sting made Hernandez tag with the Scorpian Deathdrop.
Winner:Sting

"Woried Elite"
Eric young is shown pacing back and forth in his dressing room. he yells at the rest of the elite saying how he doesnt even know who his Challanger i for FR09. Brutus tells him to calm down he will beat anyone they pick EY agrees and starts heading for the ring

World Elite(Bashir/Magnus/Williams/Young) Vs James Storm/Chris Harris/Rob Terry/Bobby Rhoode
good match nothing special the Elite never looked in it. Terry made Bashir tap with his new move the Wigan Stretch. only really decent moment was when harris kissed hamada who had joined WE.

"The Red Dawn"
A promo for a new superstar called Connor Mythic(The man in red from last week)

Samoa Joe Vs Matt Morgan
Joe was Dominent. won easily by pinfall but after the match AJ Styles jumped him from behind with a chair. He beat Joe down quite badly to the extent of medics being called down.
Winner: Samoa Joe

"Joe Out?"
Joe looks quite bad as AJ called some big uknown guy to beat him down on the strether.

SHOW END

[Mr K Viper]

[center]iIMPACT 26/11/09[/center]

Taz and Tenay open the show in ussual fashion. Hyping the World Title #1 contender Tourny later that night. Fotage is shown of Samoa joe Ambushing AJ Styles and Matt Morgan last week as taz reminds everyone that morgan will out for blood tonight.

Lethal Consequences Vs Kevin Nash
These two where fed to the wolfs as Nash destroyed them with his power. Lethal got hurt mid match. Nash hit the jackhammer for the win on Consequences,
WINNER:Kevin Nash

"I am the man"
Nash grabs a mic and starts running down a list of names he has beaten since comming to TNA and how he cant understand why he isnt in the #1 Contender Tourny and he will beat anyone to prove TNA what there missing. Kip James Music hit as he appeared on stage he tells nash he is Nothing and that he should retire and save his dignaty Nash Challanges Kip to a match. Kip says he will meet Nash at Final Resolution in a Loser Leaves town match!

"Enter Sandman"
Raven is standing in his cold lockeroom with sandman and Dr.Stevie He tells Stevie and sandman to take the Tag team division by storm leave Abyss to him. Raven:"Sandmanthis is your show go on and steal it" Stevie looks disgusted with the favourites.

Dr.Stevie/Sandman Vs Rhyno/Foley
Foley returned in this match it went back and forth Stevie taking alot of beat down. Foley hit a piledriver on Stevie but sandman got to foley before the pin. Rhyno Gore'd Sandman and almost got the win. Sandman hit a sortof ddt looking move on Rhyno for the win.
Winners: Raven's Flock

"Unleashed"
Abyss Arrived on the stage with a mic he thanked Stevie from freeing him from the mask but he didnt enjoy the beating he got and he wants Raven. just as he turns around Raven hits him with a sledgehammer. Raven stands over a KO'd Abyss.

"The Draw"
Mr. Smith is in the ring he Announces that next week the 4th Quaterfinal will be Chris Sabin Vs Hulk Hogan.

#1 Contender Tourn:QF1-Sting Vs Hernendez
Sting got big pop. Match was open untillthe fans really got on stings side and Super mex just got beat down. Sting made Hernandez tag with the Scorpian Deathdrop.
Winner:Sting

"Woried Elite"
Eric young is shown pacing back and forth in his dressing room. he yells at the rest of the elite saying how he doesnt even know who his Challanger i for FR09. Brutus tells him to calm down he will beat anyone they pick EY agrees and starts heading for the ring

World Elite(Bashir/Magnus/Williams/Young) Vs James Storm/Chris Harris/Rob Terry/Bobby Rhoode
good match nothing special the Elite never looked in it. Terry made Bashir tap with his new move the Wigan Stretch. only really decent moment was when harris kissed hamada who had joined WE.

"The Red Dawn"
A promo for a new superstar called Connor Mythic(The man in red from last week)

Samoa Joe Vs Matt Morgan
Joe was Dominent. won easily by pinfall but after the match AJ Styles jumped him from behind with a chair. He beat Joe down quite badly to the extent of medics being called down.
Winner: Samoa Joe

"Joe Out?"
Joe looks quite bad as AJ called some big uknown guy to beat him down on the strether.

SHOW END

[Mr K Viper]

[center]iIMPACT 26/11/09[/center]

Taz and Tenay open the show in ussual fashion. Hyping the World Title #1 contender Tourny later that night. Fotage is shown of Samoa joe Ambushing AJ Styles and Matt Morgan last week as taz reminds everyone that morgan will out for blood tonight.

Lethal Consequences Vs Kevin Nash
These two where fed to the wolfs as Nash destroyed them with his power. Lethal got hurt mid match. Nash hit the jackhammer for the win on Consequences,
WINNER:Kevin Nash

"I am the man"
Nash grabs a mic and starts running down a list of names he has beaten since comming to TNA and how he cant understand why he isnt in the #1 Contender Tourny and he will beat anyone to prove TNA what there missing. Kip James Music hit as he appeared on stage he tells nash he is Nothing and that he should retire and save his dignaty Nash Challanges Kip to a match. Kip says he will meet Nash at Final Resolution in a Loser Leaves town match!

"Enter Sandman"
Raven is standing in his cold lockeroom with sandman and Dr.Stevie He tells Stevie and sandman to take the Tag team division by storm leave Abyss to him. Raven:"Sandmanthis is your show go on and steal it" Stevie looks disgusted with the favourites.

Dr.Stevie/Sandman Vs Rhyno/Foley
Foley returned in this match it went back and forth Stevie taking alot of beat down. Foley hit a piledriver on Stevie but sandman got to foley before the pin. Rhyno Gore'd Sandman and almost got the win. Sandman hit a sortof ddt looking move on Rhyno for the win.
Winners: Raven's Flock

"Unleashed"
Abyss Arrived on the stage with a mic he thanked Stevie from freeing him from the mask but he didnt enjoy the beating he got and he wants Raven. just as he turns around Raven hits him with a sledgehammer. Raven stands over a KO'd Abyss.

"The Draw"
Mr. Smith is in the ring he Announces that next week the 4th Quaterfinal will be Chris Sabin Vs Hulk Hogan.

#1 Contender Tourn:QF1-Sting Vs Hernendez
Sting got big pop. Match was open untillthe fans really got on stings side and Super mex just got beat down. Sting made Hernandez tag with the Scorpian Deathdrop.
Winner:Sting

"Woried Elite"
Eric young is shown pacing back and forth in his dressing room. he yells at the rest of the elite saying how he doesnt even know who his Challanger i for FR09. Brutus tells him to calm down he will beat anyone they pick EY agrees and starts heading for the ring

World Elite(Bashir/Magnus/Williams/Young) Vs James Storm/Chris Harris/Rob Terry/Bobby Rhoode
good match nothing special the Elite never looked in it. Terry made Bashir tap with his new move the Wigan Stretch. only really decent moment was when harris kissed hamada who had joined WE.

"The Red Dawn"
A promo for a new superstar called Connor Mythic(The man in red from last week)

Samoa Joe Vs Matt Morgan
Jo[font="Verdana"][size="2"]e[/size][/font] was Dominent. won easily by pinfall but after the match AJ Styles jumped him from behind with a chair. He beat Joe down quite badly to the extent of medics being called down.
Winner: Samoa Joe

"Joe Out?"
Joe looks quite bad as AJ called some big uknown guy to beat him down on the strether.

SHOW END

[Split Second]

Yeah, there's a lot you've got to learn here, man. I know you want to just write your own thing, but cancelling all the storylines and doing what you want with no explanation is kind of lazy. It seems like a cop out and not very creative. I think you shoudl think things through, perhaps have planned a few months with the current storylines and then moved on to what you wanted to write.

But you really need to improve your shows. They're far too short and leave a lot to be desired. We need far more detail in each setence, and to add to that, we need more excited setences and paragraphs. Don't just tell it plainly, make it really exciting. Make it so that I simply HAVE to read on. Get some new vocab in your system, you could make TNA a really exciting promotion with a good format and an exciting show.

I'd check out some diaries before you continue; see what they do and don't do well and build on that. My advice would be to hunt down Tarheels TNA 2005/2006 diary - I think that recap style he used would be perfect for you.

I don't want to come across harsh, but you're new and you want to improve which is awesome. We were all new once and I hope you take what I say and use it to come back with or continue a very good diary.

[Mr K Viper]

[quote name='Split Second' date='17 November 2009 - 07:33 AM' timestamp='1258443206' post='1922616']
Yeah, there's a lot you've got to learn here, man. I know you want to just write your own thing, but cancelling all the storylines and doing what you want with no explanation is kind of lazy. It seems like a cop out and not very creative. I think you shoudl think things through, perhaps have planned a few months with the current storylines and then moved on to what you wanted to write.

But you really need to improve your shows. They're far too short and leave a lot to be desired. We need far more detail in each setence, and to add to that, we need more excited setences and paragraphs. Don't just tell it plainly, make it really exciting. Make it so that I simply HAVE to read on. Get some new vocab in your system, you could make TNA a really exciting promotion with a good format and an exciting show.

I'd check out some diaries before you continue; see what they do and don't do well and build on that. My advice would be to hunt down Tarheels TNA 2005/2006 diary - I think that recap style he used would be perfect for you.

I don't want to come across harsh, but you're new and you want to improve which is awesome. We were all new once and I hope you take what I say and use it to come back with or continue a very good diary.
[/quote]

Thanks for the advice I am going to do my damnm best to improve this! I am going to take more time on my shows to make them more exciting. I havnt really caught up on TNA the last month. but I will improve with all your help.

Watch this space.

[C-MIL]

Closed & Eaten By Ruki!