Nice work Cole.
If I could make a suggestion, you might want to see if you can clean up some of the fade effects. Theres spots where things are going through where they shouldn't. - You can see Def's tie through Bruce Willis's head on the far left and the center cut of Def has the same problem with the haad and right shoulder area.
Also you might try to get the large 16 in the middle a bit less choppy around the edges.
Other than that, although its a bit busy for my taste I definately get a feel for the movie and its something that would easilly grab my attention at the theater.
really nice work.