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Hi I am TP. I used to run a promotion called the PW but the bigger promotions stole my established talent and eventually forced me to go out of business. I have worked some basic jobs lately and I still own that 89 Dodge Omni. I also own a 93 Taurus. I am looking to buy out a promotion or become a head booker until I get enough money or interested people in starting my own promotion. I am a good booker and I am mildly over. If I find my article in that wrestling magazine I will show you how they rated my stats. They rated it in a lot of categories(I will post my player stats later). So the other night when I got home from work at 7 I laid back and watched the tape of RAW from the previous night. Watching it made me wanna get back into the business. I read up on the industry and noticed Lance Storm and many others retired. I also noticed that DDP and Austin were trying to get back into the ring. With talent and big names like that out there I probably could bring some guys into a new fed. So I typed up an application and sent it out to every promotion I could think of. WWE, TNA, ROH, CZW, and many others were on that list. I just sat around waiting for a response to my emailed applications.

OOC: I am doing this on TEW and starting unemployed. I haven't actually started the game because I am gonna try and fix the TEWZone data as much as I can. In the questions section I have a thread for this. Go there if you wanna help me with the TEWZone data. Also I wanna get 10 people from the boards into my fed so ONCE you do your suggestions and corrections in that other thread post your TEW stats. Follow those directions in that thread though.

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So I went into work today and as I sat there with 3 coworkers we discussed our futures with Red Lobster and such. When they were done I brought up my wrestling past and how I wanted to get involved again. 1 guy Geoff was a huge wrestling fan and heavily in favor of Evolution kicking HHH out or Orton and bringing in BEnjamin. Then Scott the gay guy but good friends with Geoff(who is straight) and only a pay per view wrestling fan and heavily attracted to Batista. Then last was Jason a guy who doesn't like wrestling but has an open mind. A huge baseball fan is Jason. So when I told them my plan they laughed at me since none had ever heard of anything outside of WWF, WWE, and WCW. Geoff knew a little about ECW from the Invasion angle and such. So later that day as I was day dreaming and cutting lettuce I decided I needed to go all out. I was gonna quit my job and try to keep in touch with about 8 people from there. I needed to put my 2 weeks notice in though. When to announce it was key though.

I got home and checked my emails. All I got was some spam from WWE and other sites. The WWE spam doesn't open right though since I don't have the right flash update. Oh well stuff happens. I started reading up on the worlds best wrestlers and how much they wanted for indy bookings just in case I needed to open my own promotion. In order to do that I would need about a 50 thousand dollar lone though. Lots of things I needed to think about. Good thing tomorrow is my day off!

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Diary Entry 1

Dear Diary

After a long time of going through many different game plans I talked to my grandpa who happened to sell Ted Turner Amway a few years back. My grandpa offered me a couple million dollars. He has always had money but never has given it to anyone in the family. I asked thinking I have nothing to lose. My mom figured he would say no but when he said yes she flipped and then said nonshalantly(sp)... "hell he doesn't need it anyways." I thanked my grandfather and promised him I would turn out a profit with my new company. I called Ted Turner and he told me the rumors about him getting back into wrestling were false. He didn't want in the business. I asked him for some assistance and he gave me numbers of people I could reach about my promotion. Workers, staff, and television networks. Now none of this happened over night. This happened over the course of a year and a half. After much work me and my friends still had no staff. So my friends offered to help me a little bit. I basically ended up splitting 4 million dollars between all of them. We had our first venue booked. It was gonna be called Legends. I ordered a World Title and 2 Tag Team Titles online. I decided to have a cruiserweight division even though we didn't have a title for them. The first show will not have any titles fought for but we will unveil them. We will also have some announcements regarding the belts. Yeah this idea sounds great. How come whenever I write in this dumb online diary I always end up rambling? Anywho, I never thought I would be 19, rich, and owning my very own wrestling promotion. It is a good thing my friend Tom is good with building websites. The website should be up soon with my roster and advertisements for our first show. I am also glad my grandpa is willing to pitch my promotion to some of his friends as well. It is nice having some connections. With a possible television deal in the works I think this could work out. We don't have any 6 sided rings with dual entrances like American Gladiators or anything but we will have some pretty good shows. I have no doubt. Espescially with the roster I have assembled so far. Well I better get some shut eye.

PS... I quit Red Lobster the night I got the money.

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Champions of Wrestling!

CoWrestling.com

May 16, 2004

CoW has recieved a television deal on MTV.  Every Friday night at 10 PM CoW Legends will air.  It will be a 2 hour show that promises to deliver the goods.

Roster

Bill Goldberg

Brock Lesnar

Buff Bagwell

Charles "The Pimp" Wright

Chris Candido

MVP Chris Kanyon

CW Anderson

David  Flair

Diamond Dallas Page

Duane Gillberg

Evan Karagias

Hulk Hogan

Jinsei Shinzaki

Lash Leroux(guest referee the whole first show)

Midajah(Manages Randy Savage)

Randy Savage

Sting

Ted Dibiase

Vampiro

Announcers

Bobby Heenan

Tony Schiavone

Joanie China Laurer

Legends Debut Card

Jinsei Shinzaki VS Charles Wright

David Flair VS Duane Gillberg

10 Man Battle Royal

All workers will be in attendance.  Also TP the owner of CoW will be in attendance.  Tune in at 10PM on MTV for all the action!

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June 4, 2004 Legends on MTV

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I attended the first CoW Legends show. Overall it was an alright show. The whole set up was good but not state of the art or anything.

The show kicked off with a slight buzz in the air. The announcers all were introduced seperately with videos and music. The crowd popped for each of them. Heenan got the biggest pop of the 3 announcers. Joanie Laurer or whatever her name is looks a lot like Chyna from the WWE a few years ago(OOC: I know she is but this is from a fans point of view). She looks like she could take some of the guys in CoW.

Charles Wright VS Jinsei Shinzaki

Charles was just too slow to wrestle Shinzaki. Shinzaki did a nice looking diving clothesline off the top rope t hat Wright sold very well. The crowd kept chanting "God-fath-er." He had him up for the Pimp Drop hit Lash in the nose and it started to bleed. Shinzaki spun out of it and hit a quick roundhouse kick that knocked Charles down. Lash went to the outside real quick to get his nose checked. CW Anderson came out and knocked both men out with chairs. He his Shinzaki first though which is why Shinzaki won via DQ. David Flair came out and the 2 beat on both men for a little bit. The segment lasted about 10 minutes.

Buff Hype for the Royale

Everyone knows how a Bagwell promo goes. He talked about how he was buff the stuff and the girls couldn't get enough. He called a girl out of the crowd and she about collapsed when she ran her hands down his abs. He asked her who was gonna win the battle royale and she said Hulk Hogan. Buff went into a frenzy and told her to get out of the ring. He proceeded to tell her Hogan wasn't buff or the stuff and he definately wasn't Buff Daddy. Buff didn't get over as a face or a heel in this promo though. He was just cocky ol' Buff.

Hogan Arrival

Hogan arrived right after Buff left. He showed up in a limo wearing a black leather coat. Black jeans, and a light blue bandana. No, red and yellow. The crowds biggest pop came during this time.

Owner Promo

The owner showed up on screen. He thanked the crowd and said the 10 man battle royale winner automatically made the World Title Tournament and went to the finals. He also showed the World Title during this time. The belt looks really nice. Same shape as the old Smoking Skull Belt Austin wore in WWE. It had a red back but the front was black leather. He also told us he was still going to bring in more superstars in the coming weeks. The crowd didn't seem bored or too enthused during this time.

Duane Gillberg VS David Flair

Duane went for a quick spear. He hit Flair but fell down on his face. David looked at him like Duane was crazy. David laughed and then chopped Duane back into a corner. Flair proceeded to do chops and after the crowd went wooooooo! David did too right back. He then screamed he wasn't Ric. The crowd started chanting "Ric, Ric, Ric." David got frustrated and powerbombed Duane. He then slapped on the figure four and Duane tapped immediately. David got up and did the Ric Flair struts. They prolly used up 6 minutes tops. The crowd knew Davids character didn't wanna be compared to his father and played off it quickly.

Buff Laid Out

The big screen then showed a cameraman running to an area surrounded by medics. Buff was on the ground not moving. This went on for 2 minutes. I knew it couldn't be Hogan but they set it up that way.

Strange Tag Teams

Chris Kanyon, and Chris Candido seemed ok but DDP, and Vampiro? That was the match up. Kanyon hit the Diamond Cutter on DDP but Vampiro came in and knocked Kanyon out of the ring about 9 minutes into the match. Candido then tackled Vampiro out to the floor. DDP got up as Kanyon was getting back into the ring. Kanyon and DDP seemed like the main focus of this match. Lash finally restored order just in t ime for Kanyon to tag Candido and roll to the floor. Vampiro tagged DDP who hit a quick Diamond Cutter out of nowhere and picked up the win. Vampiro left through the crowd. He didn't stick around to celebrate. This match went 16 minutes.

Buff came back

Buff came back in a car that he must have stolen because a pregnant lady was in the passenger seat. Buff was bleeding from the head and storming into the building. Good segment I thought.

Savage attacked Goldberg

Then Goldberg was shown coming out of his lockerroom but Savage hit him with a chair busting him open. The crowd booed and started chanting for "Eminem."

Battle Royale and Tourney Bye

This was the longest battle royale ever! Brock Lesnar won after what seemed like over an hour. He won by eliminating Goldberg who took out Savage, and Hulk Hogan.

New Horseman Attack

David Flair, and CW attacked DDP on his way back to his lockerroom. They left him down and turned to the camera. CW told us that he should have been in that battle royale and that he was robbed of a shot. The screen went to black as CW and Flair walked the other way down the hallway.

So the show was ok but CoW doesn't seem to have any real interesting stars.

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Legends Ratings

Heenan Video-54.4%

Joanie Video-47.5%

Shiavone Video-52.7%

Charles Wright over Jinsei by DQ

Match Reaction = 30.0%

Match Quality = 56.3%

Overall Rating = 35.8%

Buff Interview-77.8%

Hogan Arrival-55.7%

TP Sit Down-72.0%

Flair over Gill by Submission

Match Reaction = 14.7%

Match Quality = 47.4%

Overall Rating = 27.8%

Buff Angle-65.9%

DDP and Vampiro over Candido and Kanyon by pinfall

Match Reaction = 44.5%

Match Quality = 74.4%

Overall Rating = 61.8%

Buff Returning to the Arena-65.9%

Savage attacking Goldberg-78.3%

Battle Royale

Match Reaction = 63.6%

Match Quality = 69.2%

Overall Rating = 30.4%

New Horseman attack DDP-37.9%

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OOC: My roster is nothing how I want it at the moment. Hopefully when I get going I can pull together a good roster and can do a lot better booking.

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With CoWs arrival on the wrestling scene people have begun to buzz about competition.  They will not be competing with WWE for a little bit but they have caused TNA to get a later time slot.  So the war may be between TNAW and CoW. We look to the coming weeks to see if any talent will be stolen from either promotion.  Who will make the first blow?  Who will wrestlers view as the better promotion?  All to come in a few weeks time as CoW gets a few shows under their belts.

OOC: Ok I personally don't like the way I did the results. I am still trying to find something short but decent for my television shows. Does anyone have a diary t hey can refer me to for a good example of good short results? I need to come up with something different.

Did any of you who read my other diaries like those formats? My WWE one was kinda detailed and from the perspective of me being in the arena hearing or watching the show. My PW one was a lil detailed but choppy. It didn't flow. My WCW one seemed like it was ok or at least heading the right way but I never posted a show. So yeah I dunno I wanna write but for TV shows I wanna do short results. I like short results except for PPVs.

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411wrestling.com

CoW has been very active in the free agent market.  They signed six new people to written contracts.  Two workers from the UK, and a referee.  They also got a veteran brawler.  They also signed another tag team.  We could not get name confirmation from our source inside the company.  Will they debut this week at  Legends?

CoWrestling.com

Legends tonight is going to be the beginning of history.  The world title tournament begins and TP will be in the arena and has something to say about Brock Lesnar winning the battle royal last week.

What will the "new Horseman" do this week?  Will they continue jumping talent at will or will they get their message across some other way?

Last week Buff Bagwell was found out cold after trash talking Hogan.  Did Hogan do it?

Tonights main event is Goldberg VS Randy Savage.  TP made this match because of Savages actions last week.

Tune in tonight at 10:00 P.M. on MTV.

OOC: My results will be done a lot better this time. The show should be up by Sunday.

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I walked out of the webmasters office after telling him what the card was going to be. He put some hype behind it and I approved it. I got back to my office and sat in my nice comfy chair. As I sat there I thought about storylines, tag teams, and many other things.

I called CW Anderson to see if he was gonna be doing Z-1 and he told me not if he was on a CoW show because we were his number one priority. I thanked him and told him if he stuck by us I would look out for him. He thanked me and I immediately decided I needed to get his tag team partner David Flair over somehow. I already had him squash Duane Gill.

Then I went out to lunch with my assistant that I knew from high school. She tried keeping it business related but I really wanted to ask her on a date. I chickened out and turned things into a conversation about the fact we had no sponsors and weren't getting enough tickets sold. It was almost 1 and I had to catch a plane so I could make it to Legends. We wrapped up lunch and she asked me to sit by her on the plane. Of course I agreed to and that was my daytime.

I went back to my office and had tons of phone calls. I didn't have time to listen to my messages though. I also noticed my inbox was full of emails. I grabbed some paperwork and went to the airport.

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Legends

Oklahoma

TP ANGLE(5 minutes)

TP came out and thanked the fans for coming. He announced that Brock would not get a bye and the crowd cheered. TP showed the reason why Brock wasn't getting a bye.

The footage on the screen showed that Brock was eliminated earlier in the match but slid back in. TP said if Brock didn't win the tournament though he would get the first title shot. He then announced who would be in the first 2 tournament matches tonight.

Sting VS Vampiro

DDP VS Kanyon

79.2%

Suspension(2 minutes)

TP went on to say that David Flair and CW Anderson were suspended for their actions last week. Police escorted them out of the building from their lockerroom.

48.4%

Dibiase Debuts Veteran(4 minutes)

Charles Wright came out and started about how he didn't have a match but Ted Dibiase came out and introduced Animal from the legendary Legion of Doom as his opponent.

50.0%

Charles Wright VS New Worker(11 minutes)

This was a slow paced match. Animal couldn't get the upper hand and it went back and forth. Wright went for a pimp drop but Animal slipped out of it and got clotheslined over the top rope. Animal stopped for a minute and Dibiase told him to leave with him. Animal smiled and walked away with Dibiase as Wright won by countout.

Match Reaction = 38.6%

Match Quality = 42.3%

Overall Rating = 29.0%

Brock Arrives Mad(1 minute)

Brock arrived and walked right by interviewer Lash Leroux with his bags. He slammed the door behind him to the building.

73.5%

Jinsei Shinzaki VS Chris Candido VS Duane Gillberg VS Evan Karagias(12 minutes)

Action went on everywhere. Gillberg was never a factor and was really funny in this match. He kept getting thrown out by the other 3 men. Finally Evan hit a vicious brainbuster on Candido but turned into a praying powerbomb by Shinzaki for the 3 count.

Match Reaction = 36.7%

Match Quality = 59.0%

Overall Rating = 45.4%

Cajun Cooking with Lash Leroux: Did Hogan do it?(15 minutes)

Lash interviewed Hogan and Buff. Buff was pissed off and eventually after Hogan explained he wasn't there and had nothing to do with it Buff started hitting him. The brawl went back and forth. Finally road agents and even TP broke it up.

65.6%

DDP VS Kanyon World Title Tourney(14 minutes)

This was a pretty good technically sound match. Kanyon hit a flatliner but didn't go for the pin. Instead he smacked DDP some and went for a Diamond Cutter but was pushed into the ropes. Dallas tossed him up in the air and hit a Diamond Cutter of his own and picked up the 3 count.

Match Reaction = 40.6%

Match Quality = 68.6%

Overall Rating = 53.5%

Goldberg Autograph Signing(1 minute)

Goldberg signed an autograph for a young fan while entering the building.

71.1%

Midajah Tricks(3 minutes)

Midajah was seen walking into Ted Dibiases lockerroom where she flirted in order to get his attention. Ted finally pushed the camera man out of the lockerroom and closed the door.

56.8%

TP makes match for next week(6 minutes)

TP went on about how DDP advanced and next week Brock would face Goldberg. He also said next week a match for the NEW cruiserweight title would take place.

68.1%

TP makes match for next week(6 minutes)

Hogan VS Savage in the world title tourney next week.

73.7%

Vampiro VS Sting World Title Tourney(10 minutes)

Sting had the upper hand when he was going for a Stinger Splash. Vampiro pulled the ref with him and both men fell down. Sting just picked up Vampiro and hit a reverse ddt. Violent J and Shaggy ran out and hit Sting with a con-chair-to. Sting fell to the ground and J hit the Moonglorious. They left and Vampiro made a slow cover as the ref counted the 3. Vampiro never saw ICP interfere.

Match Reaction = 71.2%

Match Quality = 80.6%

Overall Rating = 75.5%

The Alliance(8 minutes)

Burchill and Alex Shane had a press conference and answered questions for the media. They said they are the elite and came to show the world that Europeans are the greatest wrestlers in the world.

25.2%

Goldberg VS Savage hype(1 minute)

A video was shown of last weeks assault on Goldberg. It also showed Savages greatest moments in wrestling and Goldbergs. It ended with a split screen and each man holding the world title.

75.7%

Goldberg VS Savage(11 minutes)

Goldberg had Savage beat when he missed a spear and hit the post. Midajah got up on the apron and Savage grabbed a chair. Savage smacked the chair against the ground and then tossed it to Goldberg as he turned around. Savage dropped to the ground and the ref turned back around. Goldberg was caught with Savages chair and the ref announced Savage the winner. Savage ran away afterwards as Goldberg was furious.

Match Reaction = 68.6%

Match Quality = 58.2%

Overall Rating = 69.4%

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OVERALL SHOW RATING=51.0%.

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CoW recieved 860,471 viewers for Legends increase of 34,306 viewers

Lash Leroux email... I'm unhappy with my current push. Can we please get together and talk about it soon? Thanks.

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Flash Barker, Fred Williams, Nikita, Sean Waltman, and The Barbarian signed with CoW.  CoW has been scouting all over the place.  They picked up a Canadian and 2 more Europeans.  They also picked up 2 more veterans.  This can only help and give them more options in the ring.

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To say that this is bad would be an insult to bad diaries everywhere.

To be honest, I've ignored this diary based on my general dislike of you and your reputation as a bad writer. When I saw Biggz had commented I figured you might have turned it around, but you haven't.

OOC: My results will be done a lot better this time. The show should be up by Sunday.

I highly doubt it. Your writer is dry. It's pathetically bad. Theres no emotion at all. Lets go ahead and deconstruct it.

TP went on to say that David Flair and CW Anderson were suspended for their actions last week. Police escorted them out of the building from their lockerroom.

They were suspended for their actions? What actions? We don't get a replay? We don't get a reminder? We don't get breifly hinted at the person who was the subject of their actions, we get nothing. And we don't get any reaction. They get escorted out of the buliding by police.

And that's it.

We aren't told how they feel. They could be furious. They could be incredulous. They could be happy to have the night off and very self satsified. They could have led poisoning from licking the paint off the walls and were subsequently thrown in the looney bin. We don't know, because you don't care to take the time to tell us.

On.

Charles Wright came out and started about how he didn't have a match but

Now. This has potential. Wright somes out and sais he doesn't have a match but. This could turn into anything. He could say he doesn't have a match tonight but he's really eager for one so come on out. He could say he doesn't have a match tonight, but thats all right because he doesn't give a shit about entertaining the fans. He could say he doesn't have a match tonight, but he's all right because he's going to go backstage, snort 25 pounds of coke and drink tequila out of a hookers anus. He could say that, but he doesn't. Because he doesn't say anything. Because

Ted Dibiase came out and introduced Animal from the legendary Legion of Doom as his opponent.

I kinda suppose this could be okay... Animal could have gotten a massive pop from the crowd. He could have came out and cut a promo on how much he hated Charles Wright. He could have come out, complained about being hung over from last night, and urinated on the referee. He could have done that, but he didn't, because you didn't care enough to write about it.

On.

Goldberg VS Savage(11 minutes)

Goldberg had Savage beat when he missed a spear and hit the post. Midajah got up on the apron and Savage grabbed a chair. Savage smacked the chair against the ground and then tossed it to Goldberg as he turned around. Savage dropped to the ground and the ref turned back around. Goldberg was caught with Savages chair and the ref announced Savage the winner. Savage ran away afterwards as Goldberg was furious.

Yes, ladies and gentlemen, that was an 11 minute match

Not droning on and on about how shitty the match write up is, lets deconstruct this.

4 matches, 4 MATCHES on this card got 10 plus minutes while the main event got 11 minutes. Lets think about that for a second. This isn't Ring of Honor where every match can go 20 minutes. It's Champions of Wrestling, faturing mostly past their prime brawlers who think that innovation is adding a 360 to their lariat. The prospect of 5 matches on this card getting over ten minutes is, frankly, revolting. Now continue to say that if you can't showcase the wrestling, you can showcase the characters. How do you do this? Focus. Give us two guys who are the core of the federation. Want it to be Goldberg and Savage? I guess that works. Now lets show how we don't make them the focus of the show:

Give a match with Gillberg, and a BACKSTAGE BRAWL with Lash Leroux more time.

Randomly give one of them a manager (it's not clear which) for no apparent reason.

Have a bullshit DQ finish. Eddy Guerrero Randy Savage is not

Have the crowd chant for Emenim during one of their promos. Uhhhhh....

This is all horrible booking. And, for the record, it appears in your diary.

On.

TP came out and thanked the fans for coming. He announced that Brock would not get a bye and the crowd cheered. TP showed the reason why Brock wasn't getting a bye.

The footage on the screen showed that Brock was eliminated earlier in the match but slid back in. TP said if Brock didn't win the tournament though he would get the first title shot. He then announced who would be in the first 2 tournament matches tonight.

Okay. So if he doesn't win in the tournament to get the belt, he will automatically get the first title shot. WHY. What the fuck sense does that make. He cheated last week, the fans hate him and they do not want to see him get a bye and win the tournament AND YET THE FED HEAD GIVES HIM A FREE TITLE SHOT. RETARDED RETARDED RETARDED BOOKING. This is making Russo era WCW look downright sensible.

And one more thing. WHO THE FUCK IS TP. He's clearly a prominent figure. Last week he was called the owner. NOW WITH NO EXPLAINATION HE IS CALLED TP, BUT IT IS NEVER REVEALED WHY, OR WHAT TP MEANS OR WHO HE IS. IS HE THE OWNER? IS HE A FAN? IS HE JESUS FUCKING CHRIST REBORN? WE DON'T KNOW, BECAUSE GASP SHOCK HORROR, YOU'RE TOO FUCKING LAZY TO TELL US.

This diary is so far beyond horrible it's created new levels of atrocious when it comes to writing completely illogical and uninteresting diaries. I'm pulling for this one to be closed, moved to the archives, and subsequently burnt so one can ever read it and mistake it for acceptable quality of writing.

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Nice so far. I like the format for the matches. Shorter reads are good for my attention span. I'm not loving everything, but the fun Buff Bagwell plotline makes up for that. Buff rocks!

Seriously, I'm looking foward for more..

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I do feel I need to give more explaination. I guess I have been assuming that people would understand. TP is the owner. Nobody knows what they stand for. Just TP for now. I do a lot of my booking and such on the fly spur of the moment. Then later on I write up the show. I should probably write up the shows in notepad or something. I find it hard writing the whole match out. When I read long write ups from other people it seems really repetitive. Also I don't feel 11 minutes is long for a match like that given away on free tv. I think PPV matches should all be at least 15 minutes so to me thats still under what I feel a big calibre match should be. I am having trouble finding an identity for this fed. I do not like having washed up has beens but that is all there is on the market right now. I am using TEWZone 4.2 and I created a promotion. Yeah right now Buff and Hogan are in a minor storyline that is gonna move both men into something better for each.

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I do feel I need to give more explaination. I guess I have been assuming that people would understand. TP is the owner. Nobody knows what they stand for. Just TP for now.

Then at least explain that. Don't make everyone find out for themselves. Add some mystery to it. If this is for TV, have the announcers go on about who is this TP guy and what is he all about. Don't just assume some random people are going to know who it is.

I do a lot of my booking and such on the fly spur of the moment. Then later on I write up the show.

Then that's what you need to work on - plan it to some degree. Don't just decide randomly. Put some thought into it. What would you like to see? Once you realize that, then get notepad loaded (or even just scramble some notes down on paper) and plan for a few weeks. You don't even have to do it with a lot of conviction - just pre-plan things, and you'll at least get some continuity going.

I should probably write up the shows in notepad or something. I find it hard writing the whole match out. When I read long write ups from other people it seems really repetitive.

Then just recap the match. But do it with some REAL description. Talk about past events, describe a few moves, describe some psychology and do it like that. Just describe the big points of the match. At least try to convey the match and whatever importance it may have. Everything on a show MUST make sense. Do not waste a spot on your shows, because a wasted segment is wasted money. You don't have to have it long... just a bit longer than what you've got.

Also I don't feel 11 minutes is long for a match like that given away on free tv. I think PPV matches should all be at least 15 minutes so to me thats still under what I feel a big calibre match should be.

The point is, all the matches go at that length though. There's little variaty in the matches. Look at WWE - PPV matches generally, if it's main event (and there are good workers involved) go for around 20-30 minutes. And even then, most matches will generally last more than 5-7 minutes (if we're lucky).

I am having trouble finding an identity for this fed. I do not like having washed up has beens but that is all there is on the market right now.

What you needed to do is hire young guns to intersperse with the big guys, and slowly bring them up. That's what you need to do. Bring in younger talent and let them shine through. Don't just settle for the big names - if you want new wrestlers, you gotta make them.

Overall, you need to add more detail, plan out your shows and generally try to come up with new stars to intersperse with the ones you got. You need to explain what you're doing. Don't expect people to know what's going on - we don't even know what you're planning... then again, neither do you.

If you don't have the dedication to write out at least some form of results, then end this now. Unless your dedicated to write a diary, there's no point in doing one. Right now, anything is an improvement on this.

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Perhaps you should play the game, plan stuff out, and THEN write it. Just going along the way you are, this isn't ever going to get anywhere. I was actually happy somebody was going to start off unemployed as I think it can be a decent concept, but why are you writing? It's obvious you're not into it, so I can only assume you're hoping to get recognition out of it, in which case...stop. Only continue if this is something you want to do and something you can actually get into.

And the use of "TP" is offensive to my people.

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I like playing TEW and I get into my games but it t akes time to get a roster in place I like. I have storys that I am building up to which I will have fun with. I looked back at some o f my old d iaries and realized this one wasn't nearly as good a s even those and I felt those w ere average. I am using this diary to better myself as a diary writer. TP are my initials for my first and last name. Thomas Patterson is my name. I do appreciate the criticism and you guys not just saying it sucks. I hope you guys can read my next show and offer criticism. So this isn't just a poitless post I will edit in my show preview later on.

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--Parking Structure--

TP walks to his car when he is approached by a man. He can't see who it is but the man is bigger than him and has some people with him.

TP: Can I help you?

Shadow: Yes, CoW is shit! You are shit! If you know whats best for you then you will meet us here next week at midnight. Don't bring any trouble or else you will be in trouble. We just want what is best for the business.

TP: What if I don't show up?

Shadow: Then you won't show up to anything else for the rest of your life except your funeral.

TP opens the door to his car.

TP: I will be here then.

Shadow: I know you will be. Bye.

The men dissappeared into the darkness and TP sat in his car for a little while with the doors locked. After 2 minutes about 5 big black SUVs went flying past him and out of the structure.

Legends Preview

Diamond Dallas Page and Vampiro were fortunate to advance in the World Title Tournament last week.  Tonight Goldberg takes on Brock and Hogan faces Randy Savage for their opportunity to move to the next round.  Who will advance?

CW Anderson, and David Flair were suspended last week.  Will they abide by the rules or will they go off the deep end and revolt?

Cajun Cooking with Lash Leroux will have Ted Dibiase as the guest this week.  Will Ted explain what Midajah wanted him to do for her?

Also the Alliance debuted in a press conference last week.  Will they be in attendance and if so how will they change the face of CoW?

All this and more tonight on MTVs CoW Legends at 10 P.M.

OOC: I wanna make a story out of this. This is a mini plot and I plan on revealing who the shadowy figure was and all his friends later.

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