Even in Heaven they Wrestle

[Whisper]

Ouch... just ouch.

Seriously, I give this two days before it's closed. Not only is the idea mind-numbingly bad, not to say distatsteful... but there's no explanation.

So, they wrestle in heaven huh? How, and why exactly? All we know of that is that you told us in the topic title. How about a little explanation of how the wrestlers came to be wrestling in heaven. Or how a federation even started.

Not very thought out at all really.

[Godfatha]

I don't think it's a good idea to just "add" wrestlers.

You should have a roster figured out before you start.

The concept of legends is fine because it is an interesting one. But you need more thought put into this if you don't even have a complete roster yet.

[Farmer Reil]

Giant Biba? The Sheik? Giant Haysticks?

If you're going to disrespect the dead in such fashion, at least spell their fucking ringnames right...

You managed to write Hart instead of Heart though, so I suppose you deserve *some* credit...

Edited September 14, 2005 by TheReilDeal

[craig]

o geez do you people not have pathience, sorry i am not going to post everything up once but if you want the full story you shall have to wait for updates

[Visionary]

Please correct your typos and check your following updates for them, as frankly that's my main problem with this diary thus far.

[Summers]

I wish everyone would stop being a pussy about this. Sure, his writing is shit. I'm not defending his diary. But all this "it's morbid, ew ew ew." It's pathetic. It's like saying "sorry, no new ideas should be used here."

Where were the protesters during Plankton's amazing IWF? He had people "die" (as at the time, it's what we thought had happened). I think you guys need to start complaining when TV Shows, Movies or Books involve death. It's just disgusting, isn't it?

[Godfatha]

o geez do you people not have pathience, sorry i am not going to post everything up once but if you want the full story you shall have to wait for updates

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[Whisper]

I wish everyone would stop being a pussy about this. Sure, his writing is shit. I'm not defending his diary. But all this "it's morbid, ew ew ew." It's pathetic. It's like saying "sorry, no new ideas should be used here."

Where were the protesters during Plankton's amazing IWF? He had people "die" (as at the time, it's what we thought had happened). I think you guys need to start complaining when TV Shows, Movies or Books involve death. It's just disgusting, isn't it?

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Although you have a point Summers, I don't think it's the deaths that people are bothered with. The problem for me is the way he's gone about it... "Oops, plane crash... they're all dead..." THAT is distasteful, whatever way you look at it. But more importantly, it's rubbish... an utterly useless backstory. Plankton's diary was different because it was actually good and he didn't just give us, "Mick Foley is dead. Now here's the first card..."

[Summers]

Oh please, everyone made a big deal about how "disgusting" it is (as well as how shit it is.) I agree, the diary is bad, but everyone saying how "disgusting" it is pisses me off.

I hope you all die in a plane crash, and Craig and I will write a diary about it.

[Godfatha]

I haven't really criticized the plane crash.

More so the poor planning.

[Summers]

I'm mainly talking about people ZeMapper.

[Godfatha]

Oh yeah, well, he can go in a crash.

Anyhoo, yeah craig, I made the suggestions on the diary. Whether or not you choose to heed them is your choice.

[Cole]

I'm not going to bother commenting on the fact that the whole idea of the diary is sick and disgusting, but I will comment on the fact that because just like with any other diary that craig does. No matter what we say, if it's commenting on his lack of grammar, or the crapiness of the show/backstory or even the stupid ideas in the diary. He won't listen and just come back with stupid replys to those posts.

So, don't even bother with suggestions or replys to this thing...

He won't even consider them, take a look at his last diary...the stuff I mentioned happened there as well.

Edited September 15, 2005 by Cole

[craig]

right seeing as some of you have got the patience of a 2 year old, the basic outline is from the next update it'll be falling those that are dead with what they do next, if they decide to go into wrestling or not and such, now the reason i have posted the first card is that the card is on the night they have all died so as they arrive in heaven andall that they'll watch the show which will help them make there mind up on whether to step back into the squared circle, there is more but you have to wait for that

[Summers]

Why is it fucking sick and disgusting? How can people even think about being fucking creative when you stupid cunts try and limit everything?

[therockbox]

I'm on the edge of my seat.

[Summers]

Belt up, Rock Box. Plane might crash.

[Godfatha]

My main issue is just poor planning.

It's all well and good to put thought into your backstory, that's great. It's also fine if you want it to span a few posts. But if the first post of the backstory is just a short paragraph, it makes no sense to post it over a series of posts. Just do it all in one post.

That and make sure the roster is final.

[Cole]

Why is it fucking sick and disgusting? How can people even think about being fucking creative when you stupid cunts try and limit everything?

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[Summers]

I wish you'd die in a plane crash, I'd write about it, white boy.

Edited September 15, 2005 by Summers