Mechanical

I can only congratulate your criativity and writting. I'm really looking forward to see the developments in this diary. Actually, the idea of following a single Superstar during his career its a concept we don't see too much but this should be one heck of a story.

Keep it up and you just got yourself a reader here!

It seems I'm the only one against the roster junction. I'm in minority so I'll have to accept it...

Good work anyway and though I'm not a great fan of the roster junction we still have here a reader always waiting for a show to come out.

Plus the same brand with two champions doesn't look good to me, but as I already said that's just my opinion. Plus some feuds have to be deleted because you can't run a decent show with so many feuds. I was really looking forwards the Melina/Carlito thing. Let's just see what happens... :ohwell:

Ah man that sucks...If I could vote, I would vote for you to arsenic it. The diary was going very well without this mix and I really don't care if you'll write in a more descriptive way as I liked the way you were doing this, but that's just my opinion.

Yeah, I see this as a great diary too. I'm a great fan of fourstarfizzle as a diary writer too and this is very close to his style. I know you're only in the beggining but let's see if you can create controversy.

This seems a great diary to me. A really like the idea of having KOTR, for me it was a great invention the WWE made.

It's great to see you pushing Booker T,

but I'm not so sure about the feud between Brock Lesnar and Cena, but I'll see what happens.

Dude, this diary is awsome! I'm sure it's one of the best diaries I've ever read in my life!

Here is a tip: I think you're using to much the illegal pins and the handful of tights to push heels. Some of them could win fair and square though they show some dirty tactics during the match like the eye poke.

Anyway, keep it up

9.5/10 (Y)