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What a loss it will be.
You have people telling you that you should put more effort into the shows.
Did you even read the rules?
Did you read the guide to writing diaries?
When you post in here, you should be able to take whatever comments myself and the other members of the EWB have to say. That's goes with the territory, whether you're a newbie, or an experienced poster.
But who cares? You're leaving now.
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Realism or no Realism,
Serious or Fun,
Crap Writing is Crap Writing.
I'm sorry if I'm blunt, but that's what this is.
You went from November to Janruary.
WHERE THE HELL IS DECEMBER?!
OR THE SHOWS?!
For God's sake, put a little bit of effort in, please.
Funny or serious now, you can't really argue around the fact that shows should come in the consequetive months.
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Im a Leeds fan and all i can say is **** **** *** ,Why cant we actually get an easy club for once but no we have to get someone in the Premiership
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BIRCHALL for Tough Enough! Hes a good wrestler and should have his chance!
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Great! Its worked very well and realistic and i must say its the best 2005 diary ive seen
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Cm Punk, Daniels, Sting, Aj Styles WTF I know I'm not exactly amazing at diaries and I don't reallly like insulting PPL but if you've got them then who will be in The Indy Feds?
And I'm pretty sure after going on a Firing spree WWE wouldn't go on a Hiring Spree
Other than that, OK diary. Bring them in through time not all in one go.
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I can honestly say its not a realistic diary just what i would do with the WWE. Randy and Shawn left on there own acord as there morales dropped and now Kurt Angle wants to leave my roster is struggling so it will be a bit strange for the first few shows and anyone who wants to read a realistic diary shouldnt really read this. I also said i couldnt write backstorys very well and i guess i proved that
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WWE Roster!
Face Tweener Heel
Main Eventers
Chris Benoit
Chris Jericho
Eddie Guerrero
John Cena
Sting
The Undertaker
Edge
Kurt Angle
Ric Flair (!)
Triple H
Upper Mid Carders
AJ Styles
Booker T
Ken Shamrock (Injured)
RVD
Shelton Benjamin
William Regal
Batista
Kane
Raven
Mid Carders
Charlie Haas
Chavo Guerrero
Christopher Daniels
Eddie Colon
Frank Shamrock
Jerry Lynn
K-Kwik
Konnan
Lita
Matt Hardy
Maven
Rey Mysterio
Rhyno
Animal
Tajiri
The Hurricane
Toto Garza
Ultimo Dragon
Billy Kidman
Bubba Ray Dudley
Carlito Caribbean Cool
Dustin Rhodes
D'Von Dudley
Eugene
Heidenreich
Molly Holley
Spike Dudley
Tito Ortiz
Trish Stratus
Lower Carders
BJ James
Essa Rios
Johnny Jeter
Mac Muscle
Paul London
Rosey
Scotty 2 Hotty
Shannon Moore
Shawn Stasiak
The Amazing Red
Victoria
CM Punk
Perry Saturn
Simon Dean
X-Pac
Openers
Funaki
Stevie Richards
Akio
Managers
Miss Jackie
Stacy Keibler
Torrie Wilson
Y2Joy
Dawn Marie
Non-Wrestlers
Shane McMahon
Stephanie McMahon
The Rock
Brock Lesnar
Don Callis
Vince McMahon
Ohio Valley Wrestling
Alexis Laree
Chris Cage
Chris Masters
Greg Pawluck
Jimmy Snuka Jr.
Matt Cappotelli
Paul Birchall
Seven
Tag-Teams
3 Live Kru (BG James and K-Kwik)
3 Live Kru II (Konnan and K-Kwik)
3 Live Kru III (BG James and Konnan)
Flair and Batista
Haas and Van Damn
HHH and Batista
HHH and Flair
Justice League (The Hurricane and Rosey)
Regal and Eugene
Rhyno and Tajiri
The Dudley Boyz (Bubba Ray Dudley and D-Von Dudley)
Stables
3 Luve Kru (BG James ,K-Kwik and Konna)
Evolution (Batista, Ric Flair, Toto Garza and Triple H)
The Dudley Boyz (Bubba Ray Dudley, D-Von Dudley and Spike Dudley)
Titles
WWE World Heavyweight Title - Kurt Angle
WWE Intercontinental Title - Christopher Daniels
WWE U.S Title - AJ Styles
WWE World Tag-Team Title - Haas and Van Damn
WWE Cruiserweight Title - Essa Rios
WWE Woman's Title - Trish Stratus
PPV's
January- Royal Rumble
Febuary- No Way Out
March- WrestleMania (XXI)
April- Backlash
May- Judgment Day
June- King Of The Ring
July- Vengeance
August- SummerSlam
September- Unforgiven
October- No Mercy
November- Survivor Series
December- Last Laugh
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The WWE was known for being Hectic but the last mounth of 2004 seemed the most Hectic Raw and Smackdown did the unthinkable and merged back into the World Wrestling Entertainment to put on another unbelivable mounth. Heat And Velocity where losing the WWE money so they where merged into Heat Of Velocity witch would have a trial period at prime time on spike TV. the Rock and Shane O'Mac came back as commisioners as on Smackdown there where two survivor series match Theodor Long's Team vs. The Rock's Team and Shane McMahon's Team vs. Eric Bischoffs Team and the Faces Shane and Rocky Became Joint Commisioners and To make sure every thing went well they both became coulor commentators on Smackdown! and Heat Of Velocity. There where huge super star cuts including about 50 members of the roster including - Big Show ,Randy Orton and HBK Shawn Michaels (Who left after many of his students left!) but many where brought in including development deals with Greg Pawluck and Paul Birchall who looked prommising and Christopher Daniels, AJ Styles and The Amazing Red where bought in as they looked very prommising and Tarzan Goto (Who Bacame Toto Garza) who was supposed to be the worlds best brawler and was a monster!. The most impressive debut was AJ Styles who beat Kane to get to the WWE World Title Tournament title only to lose against eventualy Tournament winner Kurt Angle. Angle beat a Jericho who was overly cocky after destroying John Cena in the Semis and The Rabid Wolverine Chris Benoit before that but angle was too much of an opponent. AJ Styles then went for fellow semi-finalist John Cena and won his U.S Title after a classical match where Aj won earning the fans respect but he made the mistake of insulting Batista after... And Christopher Daniels was spooking the fans out with his "Fallen Angel" ways and that included Shelton Bejiman who lost his IC Title too the Angel. Charlie Haas and Rob Van Damn made an unusual team but there styles was so different they could clash with everyone! They eventually won the new Tag-Team titles against the Dudley boyz!
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Also, why the hell do you do shows in a few posts?
You need a backstory, more dertailed results, ad info so people know whats going on and BE somewhat realistic.
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Im completely lost with this diary, and i don't think im the only one.
What the hell is Heat of Velocity?
How did the Rock return to become commentator of Smackdown?
When did Daniels, Shamrock, X-Pac, Essa Rios and AJ Styles debut?
Damn too many obvious questions...
I like The Rock as commentator though.
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The Undertaker vs. Edge
No Title
Falls Count Anywhere
The Finish: You can't get luckier than Edge who after recieving a tombstone managed to get a shot into Takers Forehead setting him up into a large spear witch sent him into the turnbuckle and then edge grabbed a sledgehammer and put his trust in it by plating it into takers head... His trust was rightly put, he got the pin "1-2-3" Edge ran away not waiting for Taker too get up
Commercial Break
Kurt angle comes to the ring looking very nervous he grabs a mic from Lillian Garcia but the Place goes darker and Stings music hits Kurt throws his mic away and gets ready for Sting...
Kurt Angle vs. Sting
WWE World Heavyweight Title
Barbed Wire Ropes Match
The Finish: Angle hit Sting in the Angle slam and got him into the irish wip into the Barbed wire but Sting reversed it and sent Angle into the Ropes and then set him into the Scorpion Death Drop but Angle reversed it into a small pakage "1-2-3" Angle grabbed his belt and celebrated outside the ring as Sting stared at him and made the belt signal
(Show ends!)
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umm but im rubbish at backstorys ic ould write a roster and champions too help people
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put more effort into your shows...There not very good and you never explained anything in a backstory....you expect us to be phsyic?
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Evolution come down to the ring and the crowd give them tons of heat but Triple H seems to love the heat and so Do Ric and Batista, Ric dances around the ring while Triple H grabs a mic from Lillian Garcia and all 3 Stand in a line ,Batista flexing his muscles and Flair getting the crowd going with a couple of "WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"'s!
Triple H: AJ STYLES! (The crowd go wild for a new hero of theres!) You walk round like you own the place with that U.S Title
well when Batista wins that match against Frank Shamrock hell come and KICK YOUR ASS! (Batista flex's his muscles and grins) And we see that "The best brawler in the world" Toto Garza is looking skillfull expessialy in the moster area because boy is he HUGE ,AND he is just what we are looking for so Will Toto please accept our request that you join EVOLUTION!
Toto walked to the stage with a microphone
Toto Garza:YES (the crowd booed) All my life ive been looking for success in the big leagues and Evolution is the Team to join for success!
Batista vs. Frank Shamrock
'#1 Contender Match For The U.S Title
Single - No Stipulations
The Finish: The Two exhange fists i a huge brawl between two great warriors And Batista wins with a POWERBOMB "1-2-3" HIS FEET WHERE ON THE ROPES! Batista ran away, BATISTA VS. AJ Styles
The Rock: Finally Commisioner Rocky is on Heat Of Velocity! And to get to the point Angle will Face Sting in a Barbed Wire Rope Match!
(Coming Soon! Sting vs. Angle and Edge vs. Undertaker!)
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Heat Of VELOCITY!
1/1/05
With Tazz and Shane McMahon
Tazz: Hello and Welcome to the first WWE Show of the year...
Shane O'Mac: ...And the start of a new Shane O'Mac and Rocky Era!
Tazz: Tonight we have a huge main event...
Shane O'Mac: ...Kurt Angle vs. Sting in a mystery stipulation!
Tazz: I Guess you thought of that?
Shane O'Mac: No Way! Rocky will be the one to tell the world that. Hell! i dont even know what it is!
Tazz: Can not wait for tonight!
Shane O'Mac: But first to start us of with a boom we have some cruiserweight action!
Akio vs. Rey Mysterio
No Title
Singles - Ladder
The Finish: Billy Kidman and Akio where both in the ring pounding mysterio's Chest and the Ref couldn't do a thing ,This countinued until Rey ducked a double clothsline and tripped Both of them onto the second ropes and then called out "619 TIME!" he bounced of the opposite rope and then hit a double 619 onto the two, He then walked over to the set up ladder in the middle of the ring and then hopped up it and grabbed the belt, The Bell rung and as Rey got down Billy and Akio where waiting to attack him with steel chairs they both beat him up and then Bily got the shooting star press on Rey who was lying on the Ladder, The two celebrated there work over a beaten Mysterio.
The Scene goes to AJ Styles and HHH who are both in a heated confrontation ,Batista and Ric Flair come from behind and Beat AJ Up
Tazz: Oh My God what a heated rivalry is building between Batista and Styles
Shane O'Mac: Yes ive got to sort this out ,Ejoy AJ Styles match next and god help that boy if he is too bad (Shane drops his head peice and then runs off backstage)
AJ Styles vs. Shelton Benjamin
No Title
Singles - Hardcore
The Finish: AJ and Shelton exchanged heated blows - With steel and wood! It ended when aj was on the top of a ladder and Shelton a table AJ was about to jump when HHH came out and pushed him off the ladder ,Shelton got the pin but he was agry that he couldnt win fair and square so HHH gave him the pedegree and then Shane O'Mac and Eddie Guerrero ran to the ring and cleared house
Commercial Break
The Show restarts with Jericho standing in the middle of the ring in his highlight reel set
Chris Jericho:Hello ,Juniors (Cheap Pop) Chris Jericho who was cheated out of the championship this week on raw is back on JERICHO OF VELOCITY With his Highlight Reel! This weeks guest is the mysterios Intercontinental champion CHRISTOPHER DANIELS!
There is a large Thunder clap and no music fllows the light turns a blinding yellow and Christopher walks down to the ring and sits next to jericho
Christopher Daniels: Jericho...
Chris Jericho: What do you want junior
Christopher Daniels: Your really boring me
Suddenly Christopher throws his fist into Jerichos skull and then hits the Fallen Angel
(Second Part Coming Soon! Including A U.S Title defence a Edge Undertaker Rematch and will Sting arrive for his match?!)
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(Ill write the cage match again so its better)
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The Undertaker vs. Edge
No Title
Singles - Cage
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Edge threw the first punch but hit didn't even effect Taker who just pushed Edge away and then for the next few minuites Undertaker had managed to destroy Edge and even send him into the cage wall with a clothesline and hit the last ride. Then Taker had Edge in a familiar position .THE TOMBSTONE PILEDRIVE! Edge was very bloody when Taker Chokeslammed Edge into the cage again, All that was left to do and Taker did it easily!
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Smackdown!
11/30/04
The show starts with a huge pyro display ending a huge year in the history - After thats ended Raw Announcers Michael Cole and The Rock introduce the fans
The Rock: Finally the Rock is back on SMACKDOWN!
Michael Cole: And what a show we have for you tonight starti....
The Rock: Hey Cole! Let the Rock speak!
Michael Cole: ummmmm.... Ok Rock but remember we are meant to be a team
The Rock: SHUT YOUR MOUTH COLE! Know your role and all that cause tonight we have some Cruiserweight Action to start with as ESSA RIOS (Cheap Pop) takes on that little piece of Crap X-PAC (Cheap Heat)
Michael Cole: and our main event tonight is....
The Rock: Its THE UNDERTAKER (cheap pop) and KANE (cheap heat) in a STEEL CAGE....
Michael Cole: .....O BOY WHAT A MATCH, Kane and the Undertaker have what you might call a strong sibli....
The Rock: .... You inturupted the rock, I like your style
Michael Cole: Ok Heres ESSA so sit back relex and watch the last SMACKDOWN (cheap pop) of the year, so Rock.....
The Rock: IF YOU SMEL-L-L-L-L-L-LA WHAT THE ROCK IS COOKIN'!
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Essa Rios vs. X-Pac
No Title
Single - No Stipulation
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The Finish: X-Pac and Essa are getting a fair bit off reaction from the fans (Cheers when Essa does his high flying boo's when X-Pac actually gets a move!) Essa had hit Essa in a ddt and climbed the ropes and the crowd went wild (well not quite!) when he set up his Moonsault but that soon dissapeared as X-Pac had grabbed Essa legs into a small package using the ropes, The ref was none the wiser and started counting "1-2-3" X-Pac garbbed the batterd Essa and hit him with the X-Factor onto a chair an then walked away laughing as EMP's and Refs crowded round Essa.
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A 2004 Video is shown hyping Evolutions progress through the year including Randy Orton who seemed left out a little compared to the rest!
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Batista vs. AJ Styles
No Title
Single - Falls Count Anywhere
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The Finish: Styles and Batista exchanged plenty of right hands and AJ got the upper hand (Rock: This boy could be the next version of me , Just not quite as good!) untill Batista gets an eye poke in and grabs a previosly used chair and plants a shot into his stomache and then hits a career freatining clothesline over the ropes into the table outside of the ring . AJ showed no sign of moving as Batista got a cocky pin and the ref had too count "1-2-3" Batista whipped AJ into the ring and he climbed in aswell only to find a bloody AJ Styles offering a handshake Batista accepts... OH MY GOD HE JUST BLINDED THE KID WITH ANOTHER CLOTHESLINE Batista walks off smirking as AJ rejects medical attention as he chases after Batista
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The scene goes to a bloody and messed up AJ Styles limping backstage shouting "BATISTA COME OUT HERE YOU SLIMY PIECE OF CRAP" The crowd suddenly start booing as Evolution attack from behind and after a pedigree and a figure four leg lock batista shouts "YOU WANTED ME? SEE YOU IN HELL AJ!"
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Haas and Van Damn vs. The Dudley Boyz
WWE World Tag-Team
Tag Team - Table
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The Finish: With Haas planted through a table already but masking it that the ref didn't know was the highlight so far, ok so the Dudleyz should have won but the High Flyer and the Legitimate Athlete where fighting the best in the end D'Von swung a chair at RVD but hit Bubba instead and sent him crashing backwards into a table o well no 3-D but at least we saw a dudley send another dudley through the table and Haas and RVD kept there belts!
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Kurt Angle is standing with a mic backstage
Kurt Angle: On Raw i won that world heavyweight title and nobody can get it off me! There has been romours that that mysterios WCW freak Sting has signed a contract to the WWE so next show on HEAT OF VELOCITY i will stand in that ring and wait untill sting comes out just too prove to you bunch of imbosiles that Kurt Angles title is safe, It'll be no title of course! (heat!!!)
The Rock comes up behind him
The Rock: My Wrestling career is over but i have become joint Commisioner with raw coulor commentator Shane-o-Man and i say if Sting comes and pins your ass next week (he points at the title) That will be on the line and if you dont show up next week i will personally give it to Sting (ROCKY! ROCKY! ROCKY! the classic Rock Pop!) The Rock Walked off leaving Angle looking scared
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Billy Kidman vs. Shelton Benjamin
No Title
Single - No Stipulation
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The Finish: Billy Kidman plants a huracanerana and then climbs the ropes slowly but surely after a hard match he sets up the shooting star press ,He jumps but Shelton moves out of the way and gets a quick pin "1-2-3" He celebrates when Paul London comes to the ring with a steel chair and cleans house He smash Sheltons head in and ddt's Billy onto a chair he rthen runs through the crowd as the bodys are sorted by EMT's (every single match EMT's have to come this is a bloody night!)
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The Scene goes to a man walking backstage towards the arena (Michael Cole: THATS FRANK SHAMROCK!)
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Frank Shamrock vs. John Heidenreich
No Title
Single - No Stipulation
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The Finish: As soon as Heidenreich hit the ring he hit the mat with a move simular to sweet chin music hit by Frank he got the pin "1-2-3" He raised his arms and the crowed cheered!
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The Scene goes to the rock and edge next to a bloody Kane
Edge: It wasnt me i swear
The Rock: Good but your going into that cage to fight The undertaker instead
The Rock walks off leaving Edge trying to wake Kane up but hell fight The Undertaker Next!
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The Undertaker vs. Edge
No Title
Single - Cage
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The Finish: Edge basically got slaughterd and yet again MORE BLOOD! Undertaker hit the tombstone then the last ride and then the chokeslam into the cage twice before he decided to escape um great i prefeerd the cruiserweight match thats why it has more description! So The Undertaker vs. Edge nice feud but also pretty uneven (sorry this is my filler text!)
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Rating: 76%
Best Match: The Undertaker Over Edge
Worst Match: Batista Over AJ Styles
Best Angle/Interview: The Rock making Sting vs. Angle For Heat Is Velocity
Worst Interview/Angle: Shamrock walking backstage
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WWE - Attitude 2005
in The Dome Retro Room
Posted
Backstory!
I sat on a seat and played with my thumbs as the woman at the desk stood and called out "Jack Brinded, Please go and see Vince and Jim for the spare writers position job, Thomas DaBoe you will be up next" I stood up with my knees shaking and took the first faithful steps to the place wrestling fans dreamed of stepping into, Vincent Kennedy McMahons office. I walked past the woman who whisperd "Good Luck" as i walked past, That made me feel better but i still shook ,I still felt like throwing up, I still felt like ecsaping from the building but i had to do this! I took the last steps and knocked on the door. "Come in!" a voice sounded, it was obviosly the voice of Good ol' J.R ,the WWE's most respected perons after the McMahon family, I felt honered. I slowly opened the door to see three chairs set round a circle table, One chair was empty and the two other where occupied by Jim Ross and the WWE's King Vince McMahon. They usherd me to my seat and the interview started.....
Vince: Hello! What is your name?
Me: Jack Brinded
Vince: Where are you from?
Me: Lincoln, England
J.R: So Jack, Why do you think you should be writer?
Me: I studied writing at collage and University in england and passed my tests with flying colors
Vince: What do you think of wrestling at this moment?
Me: Well, Mr McMahon, I think it is going downhill, HHH and JBL are not fit to be champions and are no where near as good as the days of the Attitude era when Rock and Supreme got the crowds going against The Undertaker ,Kane and Triple H before he got the injury witch made his career go down hill, No wrestling isnt as good bt the young stars in OVW and the ones stuck in Midcarder positions or less should be given more of a chance an...an....and......
Vince: That will be enough thankyou please go home and wait for the reply....
I saw Vince and J.R where in shock, I shouldnt have spoke really and if i did get the job it would be down to the other contenders being rubbish.....
Part Two....
I sat in my living room watching the last Smackdown of 2004 when the phone rang , I picked it up only to hear the voice of J.R on the other end
J.R: Bad News and Good News! Bad news is that Thomas DaBoe got the job but Good news is that Vince wants you to take the job as Trainee Booker! This saturday before Velocity you will be expected to come, and earlier is better! some smackdown superstars will go through plans with you and youll get to watch Velocity with your head trainer - Pat Patterson!...
I placed my phone on the hook and watched Smackdown! as JBL retained his belt thanks to the JBL Administration, I didnt sleep for the next few nights in exitment when Saturday came...!