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So what does eveyone think so far, good?/ bad? and feedback plz. thanx in advance (Y)

OK, I've this is an improved version of a diary I started a few weeks back, which wasn't very detailed and hard to read etc. Iv'e changed it quite alot even though the back story is roughly he same.

*Note*- I will be putting more detail into angles and interview segments rather than matches. I wont be writing a full match description, although I will write how the match ended and the aftermath, etc.

- September 2005

Back-story: After a political argument with his wife, Vince McMahon does the unthinkable. He completely split both Raw and Smackdown brands up into different wrestling companies all together. He gave his wife Linda full control of the ‘Raw’ side of things, and defected to Smackdown, himself. Fans, Wrestlers, the Media, etc, became confused when Smackdown started airing anti- Raw commercials on TV all over the world. In a recent report, Vince McMahon announced, that he will be holding a press conference regarding the future of WWE on September 1st 2005!

This is the Smackdown Story...

(SUMMERSLAM Results)

Shawn Michaels def. Hulk Hogan 

Chris Jericho def. John Cena (Won wwe title)

Batista def. JBL (Retained World Title)

Matt Hardy def. Edge

Randy Orton def. The Undertaker via DQ

L.O.D def. MNM (Retained tag titles)

Rey Mysterio def. Eddie Guerrero (Again)

Nunzio def. Paul London (Retained Cruiserweight Title)

Dont save it as a PSD file, save it as a GIF. If you want it backed up for editing, thats what psd's are for.

First off, it needs a border. A simple 1px black border will surely do, but thats the first thing anyone will tell you about it; same goes for most graphics.

As a whole, the graphic isn't bad but there is some things that could be improved upon.

The white glow/stroke around the Batista cut is always a big graphical no-no, so I'd get rid of that. I also don't like the bevel you've placed on the Smackdown logo, its unnecessary and would look a lot better without it. I would have also placed the SD logo directly above the Road Wild one, changing the 'presents' text into another font (possibly a pixel font), much smaller than the one currently. The background is simple enough and does the job just fine.

In my opinion, its the positioning more than anything that lets the piece down. The Smackdown logo should be centralised and you could have had something else on the right-hand side to cover up the bare space it would leave.

As it is, I'd give it a 6/10. Not bad, but would look a lot better with improvements. Keep trying!  (Y)

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Its a graphic I made out of bordism which is to do with my EWR game. Please Rate.

Thanks in advance (Y)

....This is perhaps the worst diary I have ever seen.First of all, no backstory. For some diaries you don't need a backstory. For a diary set in the future, you need a backstory. Giving us a list of who has which title means nothing, we don't know why they won it or when they won it.

I really like the way you write out your shows. It makes it easier and more enjoyable to read. I dont like huge paragraphs which take up a whole page describling one match. I like they way you did commentry through your matches comentating the highlights. Keep up the good work dude! (Y)

I would say 5GWS, but Its not finished and has lots of bugs!

If I was to replace one of the music tracks with another mp3 such as slipknot or something, lol, would it mess up the game or is it able to do this?

I know its a bit late now, but Ive just read throught your diary, finally lol and I though that your Great American Bash card was so much better than the real G.A.B just passed! Keep up the good work!