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  1. Glad to have a high interest and I have plenty of extra roles to use while keeping the game balanced so no reason why I can't except everyone who has so far signed up. Will close sign ups tommorow and AIM to have all roles sent out by 10ish tommorow night with a game thread up too. If i finish work on time that shouldn't be a problem.

    With that said if there's any more interest then please register it.

  2. First of all thanks to RW for being understanding and letting me run this. (Y)

    I have the game set up and ready to go and have a well balanced game for 28 players. In the brilliant event that I get more than that then I can add more roles which I have on standby.

    If demand is such that I have too many players then those who I know to be active mafia players will get in. This isn't run on a first come first served basis. However I'm sure everyone who signs up will get in. I shall leave this up for 48 hours.

    If you're interested please sign up. I have a really fun game planned! (H)

  3. Backstory is ok but could of done with some WrestleMania results in too but i don't really care it does its job and looks nice. Presentation and writing is solid so lets get down to the nitty gritty, the booking.

    As i read,

    Raw

    Opening promo was ok i guess but for some reason can across as a little dull though it does set up an interesting night ahead. I guess i just didn't like face Triple H but that's hardly your fault. The Hardcore Title match was very WWE but the 24/7 rule had run its cause but then i think so it may be retiring either the rule or the belt soon. Stephanie is back already, what was the point of the stipulation last week then? Plus what is she going to do? Nice Lesnar bit and i liked how you didn't name the F5 just yet. Nice nWo bit even if they are wearing a little thin at this point. The interview did its job though i'd keep Bubba away from the microphone as much as possible in the future, talk about a bland interview. I don't know if that was intention but there appeared to be no intensity whatsoever. Typical wrestlecrap next but Rikishi coming down at the end was a nice touch and the crowd would have enjoyed it so good booking there. The next match seemed to be very solid and have some good thought behind it, i enjoyed reading it and thought its rating may of perhaps been higher. Attack at the end seems somewhat random but lets see where it goes. This should of been the Hour main event as this was well booked. Kane wasn't made to look weak and Hogan was booked right if not how he is actually booked.nWo was made to look strong too, excelent stuff. nWo again, i really think the last segment should of been the hour main event now. Oh and Nash telling Austin he is passed his prime amuses me. I guess Austin just had to Stunner Vince though! Well booked and good to see X Pac get Stunnered, you certainly know how to book the nWo.

    An ok show which really picked up at the end. I'd give it a B simply because i loved the last two segments.

    Smackdown

    So Jericho can't challenge right? I hope you don't go back on that or when Triple H beat Steph and Jericho would really have meant nothing at all. The Rock is a good choice but it may drawf whatever Face cheers The Game will get. Unless you thinking of a turn? Women's match, whatever. So let me get this straight, Hardy hits Test and even with Christian and Storm there they don't attack back, why not? It's not like Hardy's a monster or anything, or perhaps they're scared of Lita? A Henry push could be interesting, lets see where it goes. I'm not sure where your going with Jericho, earlier he said he wanted to show his not a joke and now his got the chance by beating Rock he's upset? But that's not terrible to be fair, i'm seen far worse laspes in character i'm just being picky. So i wonder who will help Jeff, or if this is the begining of a big push for Jeff, interesting! Why did Billy and Chuck just do that? Decent match up and seems the Cruiserweight Division will remain strong on Smackdown which is important. HAHA, i liked the Booker T Angle stuff, comedy gold. Looks like a good match and i enjoyed the finish but again perhaps this could of main evented the hour? A well booked main event, i enjoyed Triple H being taken out but perhaps Jericho could of switched attention to him again at the end, unless your looking for a Rock/Jericho feud?

    A Good show at the top and bottom but the middle is lacking a little, I'd give it a C+. Once again a few excelent segements brought it up a lot.

    Raw

    Good you are booking a one hour main event this time, good choice too. Yeah like real life i'm losing track of the Hardcore Title and if this random run in thing happens all the time then it will get tiresome too. Interesting stuff and i guess them attack Spike makes some sense now but they are the Tag Team Champions so i'm confused as to why they would go after the Dudleyz. Lesnar going over, makes sense and i see you going the same route with him. I like this feud between the nWo and Kane/Austin and Hogan but i'm not sure about Kane taking a chair down but whatever, he was hurt still right. Good booking again and this is my favourite feud at the moment. Kane and X Pac? Slight mismatch there in a brawl? I like the match being booked good stuff and i'm loving this feud. Well booked match between Bubba and Rico and Rico narrowly avoiding the table is good for anticipation. HAHA, good stuff with Stephanie there. I didn't like her being back so soon but contiune to book like this and you could just change my mind. And i agree, Rikishi with Stacy? Interesting... Just like that they have a match, come on that's a lazy booking for the build up. I attack you for no reason, well lets have a match then, ok. And another good main event.

    A good show with the nWo/Austin/Kane/Hogan feud really carrying you at the moment. C-

    Smackdown

    Rock gone? Well i guess his filming or something right? I like this Jericho character, intensity suits him. Triple H/Jericho again then huh, well it was booked cleverly so i can ignore some early stuff plus this feud is the best on Smackdown at the moment. The Hardy/Canadians feud gets more interesting here, i like it. HAHA, some more comic relief, i loved that. Space Dragons! HAHA, i also love this comedy duo of Angle and Booker. Good solid Cruiserweight action and Smackdown is putting on a better under card it seems. Jacq turns on Trish right? Whoa i'm losing it here a bit, interesting booking and keeps my toes, so Trish and Ivory will team against Jazz and Jacq soon i imagine. I like where it's going though, nothing wrong with some grey booking here and there. Nice bit with Triple H and Flair but i imagine we haven't seen the last of HHH. I like that, makes Henry look atrong without giving him the title and lets face it, its a Regal thing to do as well. HAHA, good stuff again, Booker playing off Angle is golden. A cluster book here but a good one, Good to see all of them get involved and i imagine a Six Man Tag is in order soon.

    A good show which had a more solid middle order. a C+.

    Raw

    Interesting opening and you can't do much wrong on this nWo stuff, i'm guessing you followed WCW a lot yes? Lesnar did look like a monster here, excelent booking and gave the match a purpose. Don't know much bout Hugh Morris so can't say much here. Decent filler match and what does Val want with Hardcore? A new tag team perhaps? Good booking on this feud and i'm enjoying it. I didn't really mind Billy and Chuck and with your writing i'm rather enjoying them. Stephanie good stuff but where this going? A squash for a PPV isn't a good idea, i hope Matt gets some offence in or it really is a wasted slot. Good match and the RVD/Taker feud is at least picking up a bit now. Taker is being booked well as a Bad ass. Tables match should be good and i can't see the Dudleyz losing. Way to sell the attack on RVD... but it was still a good segment minus that.Excelent match and segment there, your booking of the nWo as i keep say is brilliant. I love the ending to the show and it made the show memorable for me.

    Good show and the nWo stuff is still top! I'd give it a A-. Improve the middle a bit more and you almost there.

    Overall this diary is brilliant and most of the problems are stuff you are having to deal with and even a few shows in your are dealing with them. I hope you keep it up for a very long time.

  4. Any chance of another Russian Mafia job being posted up? All the others have been claimed!

    Right then. I'm not gonna do it in 'character' though:

    One of the dock workers has been spying on Viktor and his closest employees and reporting back to the Italians. Time to put a stop to it. Track him down in Seaport and drop off all, or some of him, in Little Italy at a statement to the Ities... $1500 comes your way.

  5. I usually play it as i would in that situation which usually leads to Lightside but Darkside can be a lot of fun. It seems no matter what you do on 2 though Keria is unhappy with you.

    Although the big turn scene on number one is very tempting.

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