slain

A few basic questions and/or pointers:

- What game are you using to simulate this?

- Use a spellchecker. The board even has its own spellchecker which you will find above the bold/italics/etc. buttons when writing a post. Also, punctuation like commas, fullstops and capital letters, because right now the majority of sentences are just running into each other.

- For the sake of readability, a few pieces of bold or coloured text (like, say, have the person's name in bold when they're speaking). Don't go overboard though.

Those'll do to start. Once issues like readibility are out of the way then I can get on to commenting on writing style/booking etc.

I have to agree totally with this guy. He told you how to improve, and you've completely ignored it too.

Cry Wolf-***-Out Of-*****

Psycho-***** Out Of *****

Psycho II-***** Out Of *****

Blade:Trinity-****Out of *****

Blade-****Out Of *****

Blade II-** Out Of *****

Click.......RULED! (Y) Probably the best movie ive seen in a veeeerrrry long time! The Break Up wasnt bad either, I couldnt get into it because my girlfriend was with me and , Anyways, both movies are great!

I would LOVE to be a Raptor, id be fast as hell and pretty intelligent, both of which im not. :lmao:

I agree with Seven Nation Army, not a hard song to play. (Y)

Woman by Wolfmother, God I cant get enough of this song!

Another is Ridin Dirty by Chamillionaire

I saw it, and I fucking hated it, why the hell bother with something like this

The Break Up-**** Out Of *****

Alien Vs. Predator-*** Out Of *****

Sky High-** Out Of *****

Mean Girls-** Out Of *****

Wedding Crashers-**** Out Of *****

Boat Trip-* Out Of *****

Pearl Jam-Go

Neil Young-Rockin' In The Free World

Guns N' Roses-Dont Cry

Blink 182-I Miss You

Box Car Racer-Cat Like Theif

Hah, I know none of mine are making the list,Meh! (Y)

Original Amityville Horror anyone?That movie still scares the shit out of me

Great Diary, Definently the best one that I have ever read!

I love the storylines and the roster, everything is great (Y)

Keep up the great work!

Slain (Y)

Im Working On A New Scenario, and I would love to make this as a promotion since it is a movie star scenario, can someone tell me all of the people who were in the Film Actors Guild?

Great diary so far,but the only thing I dont like is.....TYSON FREAKIN TOMKO in a ladder match!It looked like you were going to put Venis in the match,to me,hes a mutch better fit in the match.Anyway,great diary,keep up the great work (Y)

Good Start!I'll Be Reading! (Y)