Solar Billiards

[The Mask of Norro]

Source.

Comments? Critique?

Was done for a Worth1000 contest, I love the result myself

[triplexpac]

Needs more lens flare. Other than that, good stuff.

[The Mask of Norro]

I really, really, REALLY wanted to use some kind of a lens flare, but I couldn't figure out where to put it.

And blinding the viewer from the rest of the piece wasn't something I wanted to do by making it huge, since the sun is up front and all.

[alldaws1]

Funky idea and it looks good. There's something that irks me about it but I can't put my finger on it. Still, some good work there.

[Mountainous Cleavage]

Looks great to me but it needs more stars along the tops of the planets to the back of the image. It almost looks like theres a black space going along there.

[Dr. Rated-R]

That little mess up in the corner caught my eye. Figured I'd bring it to your attention. It may just be something I can see because I keep my brightness so high, but meh.

Anyways, good stuff. The texture used for the sun bothers me a bit, though. It just looks a little too uh... hard. I can't explain it. But the rest are top notch.

[Guest muddatrucker]

I don't like the shadow on the sun either.

[Mountainous Cleavage]

Mudda makes a point, as surely the sun couldn't cast a shadow upon itself.

[The Mask of Norro]

Now that I think of it, I really shouldn't have shaded the planets.

Just keeping them like balls would have made more sense then making the sun cast the shadows yet keep a shadow on its own >_>

[The Chief]

how about sticking a cue there somewhere?

[Farmer Reil]

Needs more Saturn