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Here is the brief introdution and background behind XVW.

With the death of ECW and XPW the only true xtreme promotion left is CZW. CZW howver starts to find financial problems and is forced to close. The fans are furious and are in search of a new xtreme promotion. Relizing whats going on Rob Black and Lizzie Borden begin talks of creating a new company however Black feels he'd rather concentrate on his porn business and tells Lizzy that she can go ahead and start one if she wants to and therefore does. She starts the company known as XVW.

Lizzy immediatly gets a weekly tv deal with Direct TV to air primetime shows Monday Nights. She then goes out and gets a roster of the most Xtreme wrestlers. She signs former XPW stars like Supreme, Webb, Pogo, Mexicos Most Wanted, Youthanazia, Damien Steele, Kid Kaos, G Q Money, The Homo Angel, She also manages to bring in the Dudleys, Sandman, New Jack, Terry Funk, Justin Credible, Raven, Rhino, Jerry Lynn, RVD, and Sabu. She looks over to the now dead CZW and brings in the Hate Club, Zandig, The Wifebeater, Messiah-who she hates but knows will help in ratings since many xtreme fans like him(including myself). As well as others in all she signs 93 people to her show.

That is the basic rundown of the fed. I have around 93 wrestlers on it. Getting ready for bed and I'll post the card for the first show tomorrow as well as a couple shows. Also look forward to any input you have so feel free to tell me what u think about the roster or whatever.

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Offical card from XVW.Com

Extreme title-Terry Funk vs Sabu

Tag Team Titles-Dudley Boys vs Mexico's Most Wanted

Cruiserweight Title-Kid Kaos vs Christian York

Plus appearances by other XVW stars as well as other matches.

XVW announces first PPV-Baptized in Blood

This will be an 8 man tournament to crown the Deathmatch Champion. XVW will look at its roster of 99 wrestlers and will choose 20 of them. Then will post those 20 here for the fans to vote on which 8 they wanna see in it.

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I wrote a simply amazing card but then accidently fucked up and erased the posts to have the show in the middle of typing it up:( The show was really fucking awesome as well. I appologize instead I will give a brief match summery for the show and next show the match posts will be nice and detailed as was supposed to be.

First of BWO came out said they were taking over XVW. The FBI then came to the ring and confronted them. Lizzy told them to quit arguing and just fight. Steven Richards scored with the Stevie Kick in the end and pinning Guido for the win

Next was an amazing Ladder Match for the Cruiserweight Title. In what was an amazing match Kaos defeated Christian York to become XVW Cruiserweight Champion

The Sandman then came out and before he had a chance to speak he was interupted by Raven. The started to brawl and were pulled apart by security. Lizzy then came out and said they would face each other later on in the show

Then in an awesome tag team match the Dudley Boys gave Damien666 a 3-D thru a table to defeat Mexicos Most Wanted to become XVW Tag Team Champions.

In a hardcore 3 way featuring Supreme, Webb, and Messiah. Supreme did a Toadspash onto Webb thru a table to score the win. The table was coverd in Thumbtacks as well.

Then in an amzingly violent and bloody streetfight Raven went 1-on-1 with The Sandman. Sandman appeared to have the match one when out of nowhere Kimona Wanalay appeard and distracted Sandman which gave Raven the advantage as Raven Evenflowed Sandman to score the win. After the match Kimona and Raven double teamed on Sandman when yet another former ECW Diva made her in ring return-Lori Fullington. She came running down to the ring and proceded to have a cat fight with Kimona. Announce Joel Gertner went crazy over the freaking cat fight. Lizzy came out and pulled the girl apart and announced at the next show it will be Raven and Kimona vs Sandman and Lor Fullington in a intergender Tag Match!

In the Main Even Terry Funk went against Sabu in a barbed wire match for the XVW Championship! The 2 had a violent bloody brawl. Sabu appeared to become the winner when out of nowhere came Cactus freaking Jack the place erupted with a massive pop. Cactus threw Sabu face first into the wire then smashed him over the head with a chair. Funk then moonsaulted off the top rope and scored the victory. After the match Funk celebrated becoming the XVW Champion as he shook hands with Cactus. The place gave Funk and Cactus a huge pop as the show went off.

My question is would u rather i continued with the summeries like this or the long thought out post that i had attempted but accident deleted? Also tell me what u thing of the show. I'do a second show later tonight.

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XVW News

XVW Card for this mondays episode of Xtreme Violence

Main Event-Sandman and Lori Fullington vs Raven and Kimona Wanalaya

also XVW will hold a celebration ceremony for the first XVW champion Terry Funk

Masato Tanka vs Tajiri in a Japaneese Street Fight

plus scheduled to appear are Messiah, Supreme, Cactus Jack, and Sabu plus othere also Lizzy plans to announce the offical picks of XVW's Deathmatch Tournament in a few weeks after the voting is finished

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I have decided to write in summery mode like I did for the first show-

Warning this edition of XVW contains xtreme themes-lots of blood, unnessary violence towards women, and brief nudity discretion is advised

XVW'S XTREME VIOLENCE

As the show kicks off Kristi Myst is in the ring. She is confronted by Lizzy Borden. Lizzy calls her nothing but a slut and a piece of shit just like her man Messiah. She says she will make Messiah pay tonight and that Myst will be made an example. She slaps Myst and when she fight back she attack and strips Myst right there in the ring. -OR 52%

Lizzy then goes on to announce that Messiah will also feel her vengence tonight as she has booked him in a handicap match tonight. His opponets will be The Hate Club-Nick Gage and Justice Pain-OR 59%

Up next XVW presented a Death Match as a way to show the fans what to expect at Batpized in Blood-The XVW Deathmatch Tourny. The Deathmatch was Supreme vs AXL Rotten. The match was a bloody event. Highlights of the match included-Axl using a barbed wire bat onto the face of Supreme. Supreme driving Axl face first into a bed of Nailz. Axl used the Barbed Wire wrspped around the XVW logo in the entrance way to choke supreme. In a shocking and bloody ending a table was set up with light bulb tubes piled on tob. Another table on top of it with Barbed Wire on it and a Third table on the very top covered in Thumbtacks. In a attempt by Supreme to toss Axl off the top rope thru the stacked tables Axl tried to conter and in the process but men went thru all 3 tables and crashing to the arena floor!! Several holy shit chants as well as XVW chants were then heard. Supreme managed to get a hand draped across Axl and the ref counted the 1-2--3 declaring Supreme the winner of the massacre that occured-OR 68% CR50% MQ 86%

XVW then took a break from the violence and then decided to showcase some of the wrestling talent XVW has in a 4 way elimination match-Little Guido vs Steven Richard vs Juvi Guerrera vs Psychosis. In the match Guido eliminated Psychoses, then Steven Richards eliminated Juvi leaving it down to Guido and Richards. After a contest mixed with speed, technical wrestling and some high flying from Juvi and Psychosis. It all ended when Litte Guido scored a pin over Richards and win the 4 way. OR 74% CR 64% MQ 84%

Next XVW had a tag Team Match. The Blackout(Sabian and Ruckus) vs Youthanzia (Josh Prohibition and M-Dogg 20)-A great tag match with both wrestlers pulling off amazing moves. Youthanzia managed to pull of the victory in the end. OR 60% CR 38% MQ 82%-sorry not much to write on that match couldnt think of what to say for it.

Up next Messiah vs Nick Gage and Justic Pain. This was a hardcore match in which both members of the Hate Club were in at the same time througout the match. The Hate Club beat the hell out of Messiah with chairs, glass, tacks, and other weapons. Leaving Messiah a bloody mess. However just when it looked like Messiah was finished freking John Zandig come runing out to the ring with a freaking Wead Eater. Grabbed a light bulb tube and bashed it over Pain's head and began to use the Weed Eater onto his back. A complete blood fest began. As Messiah managed to hit the Godsmack onto Gage and score the victory. The fans went crazy as Zandig and Messiah shook hands after the match.-OR 64% CR 51% MQ 78%

Lizzy Borden come out extremely pissed about what just went down. She begins bitching at Messiah. She screams like crazy at Zandig who apparntly wasn't even supposed to be there. Zandig grabs one of the light bulb tubes and smashes it over her head!!!! XVW chants are heard as well as CZW chants are called out towards Zandig-OR 63%

Up next was a match billed as a Japanese Street Fight (Falls count anywhere match was used in the game) Masato Tanaka vs Tajiri. Very good match here. Tajiri early on used his speed to gain an advantage over Tanaka. Tajiri used fast kicks and fast paced action to wear him down. However in the end Masato Tanaka hit the Roaring Elbow and pinned Tajiri for the win. OR 82% CR 69% MQ 96%

Then it was time for the Celebration Ceremony for the first XVW Champion Terry F'n Funk! Terry Funk came out to the ring after being introduced by Cactus Jack. Terry took the michrophone and said it was an honor to represent such an xtreme promotion. He said he would do the company proud by representing it and making XVW the premier promotion. Terry chants were heard from the auddience. Cactus leaves and heads to the back while the fans chant for Terry OR 73%

Sabu runs down to the ring. The fans are unsure what to thing he looks at Funk. He holds out his hand to shake the man who beat him for the title. Funk goes to shake his hand and the place goes crazy. But something terrible happens! Sabu turns on the Funker and beats the living hell out of him. Eventually security pulls Sabu off of him but its to late for the Funker. Paramedics are called out and Terry Funk is takin to the back and sent out of the arena in an ambulance. OR 64%

Main Event time of the evening as The Sandman and Lori Fullington face Raven and Kimona Wanalaya in a intergender tag match.This match fell apart early going as Kimona and Lori spilled into a catfight with Joel Gertner going crazy and his partner on announcing Joey Styles finally calming his ass down. Meanwhile Sandman beat the living hell out of Raven with his singapore cane! Raven manages to make a comeback and evenflows Sandman. With the girls still going at it in the other side of the ring having there cat fight. Lori is on top of Kimona when Raven pulls Lori off of Kimona and Evenflow DDT's Lori Fullington!!! Raven then taunts her and covers for the 1-2-3. Sandman gets up finally and runs over to Lori who is just laying there in the ring not moving at all. Sandman goes crazy and lays Raven out with the cane and (evens) the odds by giving Kimona a piledriver!!! The show goes off with Sandman Chants and Entersandman blasting. OR 51% CR 58% MQ 37%

Hope you all enjoyed the second episode of Xtreme Violence. Be sure to vote for who u want to see in the deathmatch tourny. It can be any wrestler u want and does not have to be currently on my roster-no wwe names please since i cant sign them away from wwe anyways. send me pms with as many names mentioned as u want to 8 with the most votes will be in it.

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XVW NEWS

First of all XVW is sorry to see a member of XVW leave Mad Man Pondo who was scheduled to make his first tv appearance with the company in a match against pogo will be taking a break from XVW as he put himself into rehab. We wish him a speedy recovery and look forward to his return. He was a standout at the house shows and will be a force on our weekly tv show when he makes his return

THE OFFICAL CARD FOR NEXT EPISODE

The following is the line up for the next edition of the XVW show Xtreme Violence

Main Event-Cage Match Raven vs Sandman

also scheduled is the following matches

RVD vs Steve Corino

The Gangstas vs The Eliminators-the winning team faces The Dudley Boys for the XVW tag team titles at next show!

Rematch from the first show Cruiserweight Champion Kid Kaos defends against Christian York

Rukus vs The Hardcore Homo Angel

White Trash Johnny Webb vs Tracy Smothers

Lizzy Borden made it clear after what happened last week if Messiah and Zandig appear at the show at any time this week they will be suspended!

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XVW'S EXTREME VIOLENCE

Welcome fans to another action packed edition of Xtreme Violence.

PROMO

As the show started White Trash Johnny Webb and Veronica Cain entered the ring. Webb said he was tired of being on house show material and tonight would make a statement by defeating Tracy Smothers. OR 21%-(low because i accidently made cain talk in the game instead of webb)

White Trash vs Tracy Smothers

Tracy tried to use his wrestling abilities to out wrestle Webb. However Webb's Hardcore ways returned and Trash managed to make a comeback and hit the Welfare Check onto Smothers and score the win. After the match Webb took his singapore cain and beat the hell out of Smothers. Webb then left the ring leaving a batterd Tracy laying in the ring. OR 56% CR 46% MQ 67%

Ruckus vs Harcore Homo Angel

Ruckus was all over the homo in this one. Angel was simple no match for Ruckus as Ruckus beat the hell of angel in a hardcore match. Ruckus end the end leaped off the top rope with Poetic Ruckus and defeated the Homo. OR 64% CR 47% MQ 82%

Guido vs Super Crazy

In a match that proved to the fans XVW does have great wresters as well as brawlers. Guido and Crazy put on a heck of a performance in this match. Guido started the match with a display of amzing technical wrestling. Then about half way thru the match Crazy came back and displayed some awesome highflying manuvers and used his speed to take Guido out of the match. Quite possibly the best match of the night at this point. Guido made a comeback in the end and defeated Crazy with The Kiss of Death. OR 59% CR 37% MQ 82%

CRUISERWEIGHT TITLE MATCH Kid Kaos defends against Christian York-Ladder Match

This match simply kicked ass!! The fans were really into this one. As this match blew the previous match away. Both superstars used the ladder as a weapon thruout the contest. Both hit insane high impact moves. Kaos appeared to have the match won when York out of nowhere hit the Onion Buster onto Kaos and climb up the ladder and become the new XVW Cruiserweight Champion!! OR 73% CR 61% MQ 86%

Tag Team #1 contenders match-Gangstas vs Eliminators-Hardcore Tag Match

The fans were really excited as it became time for the real Xtreme action of the show to begin. Being a hardcore tag match that meant all 4 were in at the same time no need to tag in and out in it. In a blood bath highlights included. New Jack using his staple gun on both Kronus and Saturn. As well as Mustafa using a pizza cutter to carve into Kronus. Eliminators battled back and hit the double eliminaton onto New Jack. With New Jack out of it. Eliminators lit a table on fire and Saturn powerbombed Mustafa off the top rope and thru the flaming table. New Jack go back into the action finally and did a 187 onto Kronus thru a table covered in Barbed Wire to score the win. Meaning next weeks edition will feature Gangstas vs Dudleys for the Tag Titles!! OR 62% CR 58% MQ 66%

Sneak Attack

As the Gangstas stayed in the ring celebrating the victory. The Dudleys flew into the ring. They began to brawl all over the arena. The fans went crazy in the end the Dudleys 3-D'd New Jack thru a table and then went to the back. OR 62%

A Promo Video

A Promo Video was then shown showcasing the Funk vs Sabu feud that has been going on since the first episode. It went on to show how Sabu ruined Funk's celebration ceremony last week and sending the Funker to the hospital OR 60%

Interview

They then cut to the backstage where Funk was in the locker room. Funk laid out an expicite promo swearing like crazy at Sabu. Funk said things will be settled when he says he will face Sabu at XVW's Baptized in Blood! OR 80%

Falls Count Anywhere RVD vs Steve Corino

Simply put-Awesome! Quite possibly the best match ever put on by XVW so far! In the end RVD managed to lay out Corino onto a near-by table and deliver the Five Star Frog Splash onto Corino and get the win! OR 83% CR 78% MQ 89%

Main Event Cage Match-Sandman vs Raven

In the early goings of this match it was all Raven. Raven used the cage as a wepon and manged to smash Sanman into the cage all thruout this match. Raven pretty much dominated the match when Lori slid Sandmans Cane thru the holes in the cage. Sandman grabbed the cane and began to beat Raven's head in with his cane. Sandman delivered a brutal piledriver onto Raven and climbed out of the cage to score the win. Sandman chants were heard thruout the arena as the show ended.

I appologize for the short write up on this card but I was kinda rushed in writing it. I am in the process of getting a second weekly show to showcase the lower talent so that I will be able to use only my big names on the Xtreme Violence shows. Also am going to start having sim house shows. Will do a few of those each week and will post only quick one line results and will use arsnic to up the over for the wrestlers who win the house show matches to get them over as well. Also will be getting a devlopmental camp started in future. Starting Next show-Full write ups for each match!!!

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XVW NEWS

XVW held a house show at the Xtreme Arena here below are the results of the house show.

1. Homeless Jimmy defeated Sabian

2. Pogo The Clown defeated Adam Flash

3. Jimmy Rave defeated Chris Hamrick

4. Josh Prohibition defeated Justice Pain

5. Juventud Guerrera defeated Spike Dudley

6. Main Event C M Punk defeated Vampiro. ICP came out to help but with Julio Dinero's assistance Punk defeated Vampiro

We have only one TV Show of XVW left before Baptized in Blood current voting for death match entrants that will appear are Homo Angel, Supreme, and Homeless Jimmy. Go to the Questions and Polls section of the Diary Section and look for Xtremely Violent Wrestling and post as many people as you want as to who should be in it. Thank to all who voted so far.

Main Event has been announced for Baptized in Blood

XVW Title Match-Terry Funk defends against Sabu in a Barbed Wire Match. 

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A second XVW Superstar injured

LIZZY BORDEN INJURED

People have been wondering why Lizzy was not at the Xtreme Violence show that took place Monday night. We have found out she was injured badly from the attack layed out onto her from Zandig the week before. Apparntly she the injury is severe and she will be missing from her own promotion for around 7 months.

A NEW AUTHORITY FIGURE

A new person will take over the role of Authority untill she returns. Rumors are stirring the Zandig will take over and recreate his dead CZW those rumors however are false. Whoever it is will be announced live this Monday on Xtreme Violence.

DEATHMATCH TOURNY UPDATE

In an update the following names have been entered into the tourny at Baptized in blood. Homeless Jimmy, Rollin' Hard, Hardcore Homo Angel, Supreme, and Pogo the Clown. 3 names will be added to complete the line up however if voting changes the current lineup then we will change who will be in the event. Also don't forget the Main Event-Terry Funk defends XVW Title against Sabu in a barbed wire match.

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XVW NEWS

A lot of news to go over this time around so here is the updates

HOUSE SHOW RESULTS

XVW had another house show here are the results

1.Kevin Steen defeated Sexxxy Eddy

2.B-Boy defeated Eric Frazier

3.Julio Dinero and CM Punk defeated Mexico's Most Wanted

4.Supreme defeated Tony Devito

5.Homicide defeated Guido

6.Messiah defeated Steven Richards

XVW'S CARD FOR NEXT TV SHOW

1. Strong Style Thugs vs Youthanazia

2. Cruiserweight Title 3-way dance-Christian York defends against The Arsnel and G Q Money

3. Jack Evans vs Little Guido

4. 3-way dance-Sonjay Dutt vs Chris Hero vs Ruckus

-The Xtreme matches of the night-

5. XVW Tag Team Title Match-The Dudley Boys defend against The Gangstas

6. Shane Douglas vs Rhino

7. RVD vs Jerry Lynn

8. Cactus Jack vs Sabu

-Plus the person who will substitute for an injured lizzy borden will be announced

THE XVW'S DEATHMATCH TOURNY OFFICAL LINEUP

This is the offical list of people to compete in the deathmatch

1.Supreme

2.Hardcore Homo

3.Rollin' Hard

4.Homeless Jimmy

5.Pogo

6.Massato Tanak

7.Messiah

8.Balls Mahoney

Thanks to all that voted

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XVW XTREME VIOLENCE

NEW AUTHORITY ANNOUNCED

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Kristi Myst comes out and says for the next 7 months she will be in charge of the show. She then tells the fans tonight the Sandman vs Raven feud will end as they will go at it one last time this time the winner will go on to next weeks tv show to face whomever the champ is after XVW"S PPV for the XVW Title! OR 44%-(thinking it was because i picked kirsti but she was the only non-wrestler on my roster so i had to chose her since other women are strictly managers)

TAG TEAM MATCH STRONG STYLE THUGS VS YOUTHANAZIA

A great tag team match up. Thugs took control early on in the contest and managed to take out M-Dogg. Dogg eventually taged in Prohibition to come in and take out B-Boy to score the victory. OR 67% CR 48% MQ 86%

CRUISERWEIGHT TITLE-3 WAY DANCE CHRISTIAN YORK DEFENDS AGAINST GQ MONEY AND THE ARSNEL

GQ gets eliminated early in the match by Arsenal which then went on to have a phenominal 1-on-1 match with York. York came back in the end and hit the Onion Buster to score the win and remain cruiserweight champion OR 57% CR 40% MQ 74%

JACK EVAN VS LITTLE GUIDO

Evan pretty much took guido apart in this contest. Jack hit a vast array of high fliying moves. Guido came back halfway into the match and managed to take evans down. Jack came back in the end to score the win in this match. OR 55% CR 27% MQ 83%

3 WAY DANCE SONJAY DUTT VS CHRIS HERO VS RUCKUS

This 3 way was better then the other one earlier in the show. Dutt took control early in the contest by taking apart Hero. Hero and Ruckus managed to double team Sonjay as Hero eliminates him. Ruckus then went on to kick hero's ass. Ruckus took Hero apart when Hero's manager Becky Bayless got Ruckus's attention and Hero took the advantage and hit the Hero's Welcome to score the win. OR 66% CR 50% MQ 82%

TIME FOR THE XTREME SECOND HOUR-2ND HOUR IS THE XTREME SHIT OF EACH SHOW

PROMO

Cactus Jack came out to the ring to do an interview he went on to talk trash on Sabu. He said he will make Sabu pay for what he did to Funk recently tonight when they have there match. Cactus then headed to the back. OR 94%

TAG TITLE MATCH DUDLEYS DEFEND AGAINST THE GANGSTAS IN A HARDCORE TAG MATCH

One hell of a violent match here fans. Both team went right into each other. Highlighs included- Mustafa taking a cheese grater to the face of D-Von. Bubba meanwhile was fighting on the outside with New Jack. New Jack and Bubba spilled into the audience as the brawl continued. Bubba got layed out onto a table with XVW murchanidse on it. New Jack climbed to the Balcony and leaped off with a 187 onto Bubba both crashing thru the table. XVW chants and holy shit chants were then heard in the arena. D-Von meanwhile was in the ring going at it with Mustafa. D-Von hits a reverse DDT and and appears to have the win. But, then all of a sudden the Eliminators come fyling into the ring. They attack D-Von and hit the double elimination onto him. Mustafa seizes the advantage and covers D-Von. The Gangstas become the new XVW Tag Team Champions! After the match all 3 teams are then in the ring. Just staring at each other. Then all of a sudden all 3 teams begin to brawl. Security comes running in and eventually seperates the 3 teams. OR 74% CR 70% MQ 78%

HARDCORE MATCH-SHANE DOUGLAS VS RHINO

These 2 put on a big brawl. Rhino had the advantage early on in this match. The match spilled out into the outside of the ring as these to brawled into the audience. Rhino threw him into the steel steps. He then went for to gore him when Shane moved out of the way and Rhino went straight into the ring post. That really fucked up Rhino. Shane took the advantage then and worked on the injured shoulder of Rhino. Shane grabbed a chair and beat on the head of Rhino and his injured shoulder. Shane picked up and injured Rhino and delivered his Pittsburgh Plunge to Rhino onto the cement floor. The move nearly broke Rhino's neck on impact. If that wasnt enough Shane then tried entered the ring and tried to come down with a flying chair shot onto the throat of an injured Rhino but Rhino moved out of the way. Rhino made a comeback and went on to piledrive Shane Douglas thru the a table!. Again for the second match in a row the fans chanter holy shit and XVW! Rhino managed to roll Shane into the ring and continued to beat on him. Then out of nowhere Bam Bam Bigalow came down to the ring. Rhino and Bam Bam shook hands and decided to double team on the Franchise. But it was a trick and Bam Bam attacked Rhino from behind with a chair. He then hit the Greeting from Asbury Park. Shane coverd Rhino to score the win. After the Match Bam Bam and Shane shook hands as the reamining members of the triple threat are now back together! OR 72% CR 73% MQ 72%

FALLS COUNT ANYWHERE MATCH-RVD VS JERRY LYNN

RVD and Jerry Lynn amaze the fans in the early goings of this match with fast paced action and high flying moves. Halfway into the match Lynn gains a clear advantage over RVD. Jerry sends RVD in the corner. Lynn then takes a chair that was earlier tossed into the ring by Bill Alfonse and sets the chair up. Lynn runs and springboards off the chair and leaps into the air and connects with a spin kick onto RVD. He follows it up with a super kick. He covers RVD for a 2 count. RVD gets up and does a leg sweep onto Lynn. He then lays the chair across Lynn face. Rvd then bounces off the ropes then does a backflip legdrop onto the chair. As Lynn gets up RVD tosses the chair at Lynn. He catches it and RVD hits him with the Vandamninator. RVD gets a 2 count on the pin. Lynn kicks RVD when he gets up. The 2 trade punches as RVD does a spinkick that sends Lynn crashing to the outside. RVD does his taunting as Lynn gets back onto the ring apron. RVD punches Lynn who punches him back. Lynn suplexs RVD to the outside. Lynn goes into the ring and bounces off the ropes than flips over the top rope and smashes onto RVD. This is awesome chants are then chanted! Lynn and RVD slowly get to there feet and then trade chops. RVD tosses Lynn back into the ring and follows him in. Alfonso then tosses RVD another chair. RVD catches the chair and then tosses to Lynn. Lynn catches but instead of getting hit with another daminaot Lynn takes the chair and smashes it over RVD'S head Lynn hits the cradle piledriver and scores a 2 count. Lynn argues with the ref about a slow count. When he turns around RVD hits a super kick. RVD then lays the chair onto Lynn and hits the rolling thunder. He follows it up with the 5 star frogsplash to score the win. OR 79% CR 73% MQ 86%

RAVEN VS SANDMAN

Sandman immediatly attacked Raven when the match started. He beat hm down with his singapore cane. Raven mounted a comeback and managed to take out Sandman. He set a chair up in the ring and whiped him into the ropes when he come back he hit a drop toe hold sending Sandman face first into the chair. He wend onto use the chair to beat the hell out of Sandman. Sandman made a comeback in the match and cracked Raven right between the legs with the cane. As sandman went on to beat raven to a bloody mess Kimona ran into the ring. She took the cane from Sandman and when he got in her face she kicked him between the legs. Raven then hit the Evenflow ddt and coverd sandman for the win. OR 77% CR 79% MQ 74%

MAIN EVENT CACTUS JACK VS SABU BARBED WIRE MATCH

Cactus vowed revenge and that is exactly what he got in this match. Cactus used the wire to his advantage and whiped Sabu into it several times thruout the match. At one point in the match Sabus throat was stuck in the wire. Cactus went to leap onto the trapped Sabu but he moves out of the way somehow and Cactus splashed himself into the wire. Sabu then went on a rampage beating the hell out of Cactus the rest of the match. Sabu fucked up a moonsault near the end and Cactus finally gained back control. Cactus used a piledriver onto a chair to defeat Sabu. After the match however Sabu attacked Cactus and left an injured cactus laying in the ring as the show ended. OR 74% CR 78% MQ68%

I appologize for the first hour not having much match description but had little i could think of. I decided to take cost cutting measures and are going to release several superstart-basically the ones i can never think of what to put in the show results. All the xtreme people will stay but the first our less xtreme talnts will find most of them released. This is done also to improve popularity of the fed in the game as well.

PPV will be written up sometime Tuesday. Being that my Xtreme matches are always well written be sure to see a great write up for deathmatch tourny.

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Okay, let me start here by saying I'm not here to break your spirit, this is constructive criticism.

All 'Extreme' diaries have potential, but to any person reading they aren't as good as the real thing, if this is your first diary I'd recomend changing on the basis that anything expected to be hardcore isn't cool if you can't genuinely see it.

Right, you wrote up a show and then erased it, so you just wrote a brief summary? Big no-no, if someone is reading they will be patient enough for you to write the show up once more, I mean it's for your enjoyment, and if you really loved the show then you could've written it up again, and this time with experience of knowing where you went wrong.

Your matches seem like you just played EWR and went with what it said, only changed the words, where is the psychology? If you write shorts results then stick to key moments in the match, if you write long results then use psychology, otherwise it's just move for move and it gets boring.

Layout, this is the one thing I'll say to EVERYBODY who doesn't have a good one, your first impressions mean a lot, if it's dull black on the screen with a couple of bolds it just doesn't attract attention, use a couple of colours but don't over do it, sort your paragraphs properly and make sure each segment as clearly marked, on some of them a skim reader couldn't tell whether it was the beginning or the end of the segment without reading through.

Booking seems very basic. Also, why would Cactus Jack be working an indy show like that, he's a fucking WWE legend, not some famous indy guy, he barely wrestles for WWE so he's not working this show, trust me.

Overall I'd say it gets a poor rating from me, but that doesn't mean it's the end of the world, work on the points I mentioned and I'm sure you'll get some fanbase, their always is for violence diaries.

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just pointing out a few things from that persons post.

The xtreme matches are very thought out and in fact i dont even read the lame play-by-play on the game. Its all made up as can be seen in the rvd-lynn match and can also be seen in the dudleys vs ganstas and the gangstas vs Elliminatos match from the show before this one. I also thought me bringing in kimona and lori were cool ideas that i myself thought up. Plus believe me when i did the shit with Zandig and Messiah that was my creation not the games. Only time the full play by play wasnt used were for the lowercard wrestlers which i cant think of what to do with them. Lastly Cactus is there to assist Funk. Besides if Foley can do roh shows and several other indys there is no reason why he cant appear on mine as well. Plus he is signed to mine and the wwe plain sucks ass.

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The xtreme matches are very thought out and in fact i dont even read the lame play-by-play on the game. Its all made up as can be seen in the rvd-lynn match and can also be seen in the dudleys vs ganstas and the gangstas vs Elliminatos match from the show before this one.

I wasn't saying they WERE from the game, I'm saying the way they are written FEELS like it, it just feels like PBP when you read it, like I said, use some psychology, mentioned how each wrestler reacts, mention that he's working over a certain area, you knowm kind of like a mental commentary.

Lastly Cactus is there to assist Funk. Besides if Foley can do roh shows and several other indys there is no reason why he cant appear on mine as well. Plus he is signed to mine and the wwe plain sucks ass.

Believe me when I say, NO!

RoH and WWE have a great working relationship, Foley signed because RoH is a respectable promotion and he didn't have to take serious bumps. In a promotion like this he would have to take bumps, and he wouldn't go with a well established hardcore company any more, let alone a new one, simply due to the fact WWE would not appreciate him galavanting around a place like this.

Like I said, keep working and I'll keep watching to see any improvement.

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Like this diary wish match write up would change a little just something i dont like about these writeups but hey thats just me. Anyways good luck as this diary has a chance to get better with time as you become more comfortable with your product and give it a unique feel anyways good luck and ill keep checkin this out.

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ncguy thanks for the more positve respopnse. The PPV is being complety wrote up before posted with all the matches geting long planed out play by plays. Also photos will be used thruout the posts and so will be cool. It will be the standard for all posts made after this.

XVW NEWS

In an effort to stick to the Xtreme the first roster cut has taken place as the XVW Roster Commitee has released Alex Shelly. He is a great wrestler but when it comes to XVW's style he simply did not fit in.

INJURY

In the 2nd XVW injury during a dark match at the XVW tv taping the FBI faced BWO in a match in which Big Sal E. Graziono strained his tricep he will be out for 2 months.

Due to PPV this week no house will take place and none are planned due the possibilty of a secondary show stating next week.

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XVW BAPTIZED IN BLOOD!!!!!

As the show begins the XVW Champion Terry Funk comes to the ring.

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TERRY-Sabu you motherfucker I will finish you one and for all tonight in the barbed wire. You think you did something by attacking Cactus Monday after your match. Well tonight Sabu you will find out why I am the true Hardcore Legend.

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Suddenly the lights in the arena go off. When they come back on Sabu is standing in the ring. Fans go crazy with Sabu chants. The two stare each other down then immedialy throw punches at each other. Funk tosses Sabu to the outside and follows him. Funk grabs a chair and smashes it over Sabu's head. Funk then delivers a brutal piledriver to Sabu on the outside. He then goes and grabs his branding iron. He lights it on fire and drives it into the arm of Sabu. Security comes running down to the ring at this point pulling Funk of of him.

JOEY STYLES-Oh My God! Funk just used his branding iron onto Sabu!! The 2 will meet in the ring in the main event for the XVW title in a barbed wire match. They had a hellish barbed wire match at the first show and after what we've seen the past few weeks and just a min ago they are bound to top that one. Now lets take you to the ring for the first-first round match in tonights death match tourny.

MATCH ONE-HOMELESS JIMMY VS ROLLIN' HARD

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Homeless Jimmy then comes down to the ring with his shopping cart of weapons. While Rollin Hard is in the ring waiting for him.(cant find rollin hard pic sorry)

Rollin Hard jumps to the outside and as Jummy gets there he is immediatly hit with a chair shot. Hard then gets ontop of him and throws several punches. He points towards a bed of nails on the floor. He manages to pick it up and lean it against the corner post. He whips Jimmy into it but Jummy counters and sends Rollin' face first into the bed of nails He then goes over to his shopping card of toys and grabs a cookie shieet. and cracks it over his head. Jimmy tosses Hard into the guard rail. He runs towards him and goes for splash Hard moves and Jimmy goes flying over the guardrail and into the auddience. Hard takes the advantage to grab a wired bat and follow Jimmy out and into the audience with it. He cracks Jimmy over the head then carves the wire into his face. Jimmy hits a low blow. He then swings that bat smacking it into Hards face. They then battle there way back out of the audience and back over the guardrail. Jimmy tosses Hard back into the ring. He looks towards the bed of barbed wire in the corner of the ring and tosses Hard into it. Jimmy hits him with the Homeless Hangover. 1...2...3 Jimmy wins and moves on.

NEXT 1ST ROUND MATCH HOMO VS MESSIAH

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XVW BAPTIZED IN BLOOD!!!!!

As the show begins the XVW Champion Terry Funk comes to the ring.

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TERRY-Sabu you motherfucker I will finish you one and for all tonight in the barbed wire. You think you did something by attacking Cactus Monday after your match. Well tonight Sabu you will find out why I am the true Hardcore Legend.

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Suddenly the lights in the arena go off. When they come back on Sabu is standing in the ring. Fans go crazy with Sabu chants. The two stare each other down then immedialy throw punches at each other. Funk tosses Sabu to the outside and follows him. Funk grabs a chair and smashes it over Sabu's head. Funk then delivers a brutal piledriver to Sabu on the outside. He then goes and grabs his branding iron. He lights it on fire and drives it into the arm of Sabu. Security comes running down to the ring at this point pulling Funk of of him.

JOEY STYLES-Oh My God! Funk just used his branding iron onto Sabu!! The 2 will meet in the ring in the main event for the XVW title in a barbed wire match. They had a hellish barbed wire match at the first show and after what we've seen the past few weeks and just a min ago they are bound to top that one. Now lets take you to the ring for the first-first round match in tonights death match tourny.

MATCH ONE-HOMELESS JIMMY VS ROLLIN' HARD

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Homeless Jimmy then comes down to the ring with his shopping cart of weapons. While Rollin Hard is in the ring waiting for him.(cant find rollin hard pic sorry)

Rollin Hard jumps to the outside and as Jummy gets there he is immediatly hit with a chair shot. Hard then gets ontop of him and throws several punches. He points towards a bed of nails on the floor. He manages to pick it up and lean it against the corner post. He whips Jimmy into it but Jummy counters and sends Rollin' face first into the bed of nails He then goes over to his shopping card of toys and grabs a cookie shieet. and cracks it over his head. Jimmy tosses Hard into the guard rail. He runs towards him and goes for splash Hard moves and Jimmy goes flying over the guardrail and into the auddience. Hard takes the advantage to grab a wired bat and follow Jimmy out and into the audience with it. He cracks Jimmy over the head then carves the wire into his face. Jimmy hits a low blow. He then swings that bat smacking it into Hards face. They then battle there way back out of the audience and back over the guardrail. Jimmy tosses Hard back into the ring. He looks towards the bed of barbed wire in the corner of the ring and tosses Hard into it. Jimmy hits him with the Homeless Hangover. 1...2...3 Jimmy wins and moves on.

NEXT 1ST ROUND MATCH HOMO VS MESSIAH

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Angel comes down to the ring and awaits the entrance of Messiah

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For this death match.the ring ropes are surrounded by barbed wire and the goal is to use a ladder to climb up to a bag of thumbtacks hanging above the ring. You must then use the tacks in some way onto the opponet.

Angel goes right after him with some weak ass chops. Messiah kicks Angel and drives him down with a ddt. He quicly asks Myst for the ladder. She then slides it into the ring for Messiah to use. Angel puts the ladder in the corner of the ring. As Messiah turns around Angel throws a few punches and then whips Messiah into the wired ropes. Messiah yells out in pain. Angel slides under the rupes and to the outside. He grabs a chair and comes back into the ring with it. He goes to swing the chair but Messiah ducks under the chair and gets behind Angel. Messiah drops him with an inverted ddt. He then grabs the ladder and sets it up in the middle of the ring. He starts to go up but Angel takes the chair and cracks Messiah in the back with it. Angel then climbg to the top rope and hits The Flying Fairy onto Messiah. Angel takes Messiah's face and grinde's it into the barbed wire ropes. Angel then takes the ladder and as Messiah gets up he runs and cracks him in the face with it. Angel then sets the ladder up and climbs to the top. Messiah starts climbing the other side and bother are now at the top of the ladder. The trade punches and Messiah gains advantage over the punch trade and suplexes Angel off the ladder. Something goes wrong however as when they crash down Angel hits the barbded wire ropes and is actually stuck inside of them. Joey is heard yelling OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! The fans give a massive pop and XVW chants are heard. Messiah gets up and grabs the ladder he climbs it and gets the thumbtacks. He lays them out on the ring. He pulls a bloody Angel out of the wire and hits the Godsmack onto the Tacks to score the win. (Enjoyed creating the play-by-play for that one hope u think that was a cool match like i did)

3RD 1ST ROUND MATCH SUPREME VS POGO THE CLOWN-BEDS OF BARBED WIRE AND LIGHT BULBS.

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Supreme enters the ring as Pogo is waiting in the ring already. (Have Pogo pics but not of him entering the ring)

The 2 big men trade right hands. Supreme bounces off the ropes and clotheslines Pogo. It stuns him as Pogo bounces back and leans against the ropes. Supreme charges again and this time the clothesline takes him over the ropes and to the outside. Supreme follows him to the outside. The punches continue and Supreme tosses Poge into the gueardrail. Supreme grabs a chair and goes to swing it but misses. Pogo punches the chair back into Supreme's face. Pogo takes the chair and smashes it down onto Supremes throat. Pogo then grabs Supreme by the head and drives him face first into the bed of wire. Pogo takes the wire and slides Supremes face into it back and forth like. He grabs a lightbulb tube and smashes it down over the head of Supreme. Pogo then grabs another bed of wire and sets it standing up in the corner. He throws Supreme into it. Supreme just lays there against it. Pogo comes in to splash him but Supreme moves out of the way and Pogo splashes into the wire. You looks down at the bed of light bulbs and points at them. He yells "you want some sick shit". Supreme grabs the bed of light bulbs and slides in into the ring. He sets up to chais and sits the bed of light bulbs between them. As to hold the bed of bulbs up. He takes way to long to do it and Pogo smashes him in the back with a light bulb that had fallen of the bed. He takes Supreme and tosses him into the corner. He sets him up onto the top rope as to possibly powerbomb him off the top onto the bulbs. Supreme countes and pushes him off the top and sends him crashing thru the bed of lught bulbs below. Supreme leaps off with the Toad Splash and scores the win.

[4TH AND FINAL 1ST ROUND MATCH MASATO TANAKA VS BALLS MAHONEY-BEDS OF NAILS AND GLASS

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Masato comes out and the fans pop for the former FMW and ECW champion. Then Balls comes out with a chair in hand.

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Balls charges right at Massato with his chair and smacks an unexpected Tanaka in the head. Balls waist now time in getting hardcore in this one. Balls whips Tanaka right into the bed of nails. Balls charges and Tanaka moves as Balls runs into the nails. Tanaka quickly hits his roaring elbow but the impact takes Balls to the outside of the ring. Masato then goes to the outside. He smacks Balls with his chair. Tanaka points toward the bed of glass lating on the floor. He goes to powerbomb Balls onto it but Balls hits a lowblow. Balls reaches under the ring and pulls out a barbed wire bat. he cracks the bat over the head of Tanaka. He then goes and drives Tanaka face first into the glass. He then grabs a piece of the broken glass and sticks it into the forhead of Tanaka. He then tosses him back into the ring. Balls then grabs the bed of nails that was in the corner and lays it down onto the ring floor. Tanaka comes back with a quick right hand and whips him into the corner. Tanaka hits a tornato DDT onto the nails. Tanaka then delivers power bomb like manuever driving Balls onto the nails. He covers a bloody Balls to win the match.

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2ND ROUND 1ST MATCH HOMELESS JIMMY VS MESSIAH FLAMING TABLES MATCH.

Instead or reposting entrance pics for second round I will cut to the action.

Messiah comes out looking battered from his insane match he had with Angel. Jimmy seizes that advantage by throwing right hands to Messiah re-opening the cuts on his head from earlier. Jimmy then drops him with a nice ddt. He goes out and reaches into his shopping cart of toys and pulls out a steel chain. He wraps the chain around his fist and drives it into Messiah. Jimmy then sets up the table. Myst slides into the ring and uses a chair onto the back of Jimmy. Jimmy whips around and goes after Myst. Messiah hits a low blow onto Jimmy and looks towards the table. He tells myst to light the table. Myst lights the table on fire. Messiah tries to put Jimmy thru the table but Jimmy counters with a facebuster. He brings his shopping card into the ring and charges smashing it into Messiah. Jimmy hits the Homeless Hangover onto Messiah. But thats not enought for Jimmy he goes and finds some thumbtacks. He lays them out onto the ring. But, Messiah gets up and hits a low blow onto Jimmy. Messiah then hits the Godsmack onto Jimmy. He then picks up Jimmy and hits the Cross-factor onto Jimmy right thru the flaming table to get the win.

2ND ROUND 2ND MATCH SUPREME VS MASATO TANAKA -BEDS OF WIRE, THUMBTACKS, AND GLASS

Tanaka goes right after Supreme. Tanaka hits some punches onto Supreme. He tosses him right into the bed of Wire. Supreme is badly injured from his previous match with Pogo and he shows it in this match. Tanaka goes right for the thumbtacks. He drives him face first into the tacks. Supreme slowly gets up. Tanaka charges but Supreme hits a back body drop flipping Tanaka to the outside and thru the bed of glass on the outside of the ring. Supreme follows to the outside. He grabs a chair wrapped in barbded wire and brings it down onto the face of Tanaka. He then ddts him onto the glass. Both wrestlers are slowly moving as they are both fucked up. Supreme puts Tanaka back into the ring and lays the bed of wire ontop of Tanaka. He leaps off the top rope with the Toad Splash onto the wire. He removes the bed of wire and covers Tanaka for the win.

DEATHMATCH FINALS SUPREME VS MESSIAH

At this point in the night both are lucky to still be walking around. Messiah runs down to the ring not giving Supreme a chance to rest after his match. Messiah comes down with a lightbulb tube in hand and cracks it over the head of Supreme. Messiah goes for a quick pin however Supreme at the last second gets his arm raised. Messiah argues with the referee. Supreme gets up grabing a chair left in the ring from earlier and hits him in the back. Supreme slams Messiah onto the bed of wire. Supreme leaps off with a toad splash but Messiah moves out of the way. He hits the Godsmack onto Supreme driving him into the thumbtacks. Messiah covers and becomes the XVW KING OF THE DEATHMATCH!!!!!

XVW TITLE MATCH TERRY FUNK VS SABU BARBED WIRE MATCH

Funk and Sabu start with a quick fist fight. Sabu gains the advantage and throws Funk right into the barbed wire. Funk lays in pain. Sabu hits him with a slingshot suicide ddt. He then takes a steel chair and sets it up in the ring. He runs and leaps off the chair does a backflip in mid air and splashes down onto Funk. Sabu goes for the cover but Funk manages to kick out. He takes the chair and cracks Sabu over the head with it. Funk drops him with a ddt onto the chair. Sabu gets whipped into the wire and gets stuck right into it.

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Sabu crawls out of the wire finally but Funk leaps off with a moonsault and covers Sabu for the win

That is the end of the first XVW PPV BAPTIZED IN BLOOD I put a shit load of hardwork into that I hope u liked it. Sorry about accidently posting the first pare a min ago

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Decent show Funk-Sabu good feud(Money in the Bank but not Edge LOL) wish you would have put some match ratings on the PPV really good KOD for the talent involved as the only 2 good workers Balls and Tanaka fought in first round but hope to see personas expand and add depth so match have a little bit more psychology and purpose. but overall for first big show ill check back for updates.

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