Next Generation Wrestling

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

Jord and I have decided to start a new diary, it will be a small fed based in the USA and it will be called Next Generation Wrestling, NGW. Heres a quick backstory:

Two rich-kid teenagers from Great Britain one day became disillusioned with the current state of mainstream wrestling. The teenagers, Jord and Eiji Ezaki, were watching the latest edition of Raw. As the boredom set in, they became talking of what it would be like to form a wrestling company. They begged their rich fathers for money to travel to America and make form a company. They decided to call the company NEXT GENERATION WRESTLING! Bringing in the best up-and-coming wrestlers in the US, they hope to one day take down World Wrestling Entertainment. They wrestlers they signed are:

Austin Aries

Charlie Haas (w/Jackie Gayda)

Chris Hero

Eddie Kingston

El Generico

Homicide

JC Bailey

Justice Pain

Kevin Steen

Low-Ki

Nate Webb

Necro Butcher

Nick Gage

Petey Williams

Roderick Strong

Ruckus

Samoa Joe

Sexxxy Eddy

Shark Boy

Super Dragon

Toby Klein

Sonjay Dutt

TAG TEAMS:

Generation Next - Austin Aries and Roderick Strong

Kings of Pro Wrestling - Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli

Team IWS - El Generico and Sexxxy Eddy

The H8 Club - Nick Gage and Justice Pain

The New Team Canada - Petey Williams and Kevin Steen

The Rottweilers - Low-Ki and Homicide

Tough Crazy Bastards - Necro Butcher and Toby Klein

They decided that they will have will have one show per month. They have hired the Viking Hall(ECW Arena) in Philly for the first several shows. The first show will be called 'Start of a New Generation'! We hope to see you there on Sunday the 8th of January 2006!

We will get bigger as we go along, all I can say is please follow and enjoy!

Jord and Eiji Ezaki

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

ELIMINATION FOR NGW TITLE

Super Dragon v "Mr. Wrestling" Kevin Steen v "The Samoan Submission Machine" Samoa Joe v Austin Aries

TLC MATCH FOR NGW TAG TITLES

Tough Crazy Bastards v The H8 Club v The Rottweilers

NUMBER ONE CONTENDERS MATCH

Roderick Strong v Charlie Haas v "The Canadian Destroyer" Petey Williams

"The Original Playa From The Himalayas" Sonjay Dutt v "Spyder" Nate Webb

Kings Of Pro Wrestling(Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli) v Ruckus and "The King Of Diamonds" Eddie Kingston

"The Triple X Sexxx Exxxpress" Sexxxy Eddy v JC Bailey

"The Generic Luchadore" El Generico v Shark Boy

[ZAK416]

So does this mean your CZW diary is dead?

I like your style of writing, Eiji, so Ill still be reading. I hope that you guys will push some new stars and not just the normal guys everyone else seems to do in other indy diarys. But hey its your promotion.

The Results:

ELIMINATION FOR NGW TITLE

Super Dragon v "Mr. Wrestling" Kevin Steen v "The Samoan Submission Machine" Samoa Joe v Austin Aries

TLC MATCH FOR NGW TAG TITLES

Tough Crazy Bastards v The H8 Club v The Rottweilers (WOW 3 different styles of tag wrestling in one match, should be interesting)

NUMBER ONE CONTENDERS MATCH

Roderick Strong v Charlie Haas v "The Canadian Destroyer" Petey Williams

"The Original Playa From The Himalayas" Sonjay Dutt v "Spyder" Nate Webb (Got to do a dance off!)

Kings Of Pro Wrestling(Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli) v Ruckus and "The King Of Diamonds" Eddie Kingston

"The Triple X Sexxx Exxxpress" Sexxxy Eddy v JC Bailey

"The Generic Luchadore" El Generico v Shark Boy

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

So does this mean your CZW diary is dead?

I like your style of writing, Eiji, so Ill still be reading. I hope that you guys will push some new stars and not just the normal guys everyone else seems to do in other indy diarys. But hey its your promotion.

[Guest Jord]

Thanks for the comments mate,

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

Intro music plays, as Chris Hero and Robert Page sit at the announce table..

Chris Hero: Welcome to the first NGW event!!! We hope you enjoy, tonight. We have this jam packed NGW Arena with over 10,00 fans in!!

Robert Page: Yes, and what a card it is tonight!! Its gonna be madness,

Chris Hero: Yes, thats damn right Robert..

Robert Page: NGW have imported stars from all different promotions, CZW, ROH, TNA, PWG, to name a few..

Chris Hero: Yes, but there are much much more, This main event is going to really kick-off once all the four men get into the ring

Robert Page: Yes, if they hear the word 'title' they'll go crazy and start raising hell!!

Chris Hero: We better get the show started!! I cant wait!!

Robert Page: Me either, well.. heres the show for you fans!!

"The Generic Luchadore" El Generico v Shark Boy

They shake hands and start with a tie-up. Generico works a wristlock and Shark Boy flips out of it. Shark Boy whips Generico into the corner and charges, Generico moves and chops Sharky in the corner. He puts Sharky on the top turnbuckle and climbs up. He signals for the BRAINBUSTAAAAAAH, Sharky fights back and pushes Generico off the turnbuckle. Sharky hits a flying senton and covers Generico, he gets a two. He pulls Generico up by the mask and goes for an atomic drop, Generico reverses it into a DDT. Sharky bails and Generico plays to the crowd. He runs off the ropes and gets a tope con hilo onto Shark Boy! They do a bit of brawling around ring-side and Generico chops Sharky some more. Sharky blocks a palm strike and hits an armdrag on the concret. He rolls Generico back in the ring and goes on the apron. He waits for Generico to get up and hits a springboard dropkick! He picks Generico back up and does the Shark Bite on his ass. Generico fights it and hits a bulldog. He goes on the apron and goes for a springboard double stomp, Shark Boy moves and Generico rolls through. They do a very fast wrestling sequence and go to a face-off for a big crowd reaction! Generico takes Sharky down with a lariat and works over the head with a chinlock and several knees to the head. He picks Sharky back up and hits a facebuster. He goes upstairs, Sharky quickly gets back up and, climbs up the turnbuckle and superplexes him off! The referee starts a double count and both men slowly get up. They trade punches and Generico almost knocks Sharky out with a big roaring forearm. He drags Sharky over to the corner, puts him on the turnbuckle and Generico climbs up. He picks Shark Boy up and hits the BRAINBUSTAAAAAAAAAAAHH!! He covers Shark Boy, 1....2....3!!

"The Original Playa From The Himalayas" Sonjay Dutt v "Spyder" Nate Webb

Dutt starts off the match by locking up with Nate Webb, trying to throw him back into the corner. Suddenly Nate found Sonjay suplexing him to the mat, Nate quickly got to his feet as Sonjay ran for Nate Webb hurrcaranaing him over the top rope. Sonjay then sommersaulted over the top rope taking Webb to the concreat floor, Webb and Sonjay slowly made their way to their feet, Webb started the series of punches to the face of Sonjay, as they both got up the punches got harder. Sonjay began kicking and punching Webb, untill Webb took some steps backwards and ran to land an flying DDT taking Sonjay down to the concreat floor. Webb started digging under the ring looking for a possible weapon to defeat Dutt with, when Dutt comes up and attacks him from behind, Dutt throws Webb into the steel barrier. As he then has time to take his desired weapon out, Dutt digs under the ring untill he eventually pulls out, the ladders! Dutt throws the ladders into the ring and rests them against the corner, Webb suddenly starts running at Sonjay and Sonjay moves and Webb runs all the way up the ladders, Dutt then pulls the bottom of the ladders in a result of Webb falling off to the outside! Sonjay then ran over and jumped up onto the turn buckle, and landed a gigantic moonsault to the outside, where Webb moved as result of Dutt crashing down onto the concreat floor. Webb climbs back into the ring with Dutt still lying on the outside, Webb set the ladders up in the center of the ring, as Sonjay was still getting back to his feet Webb began to climb the ladder, Dutt climbed into the ring as Webb got to the top of the ladder. At the top of the ladder, Webb was about to dive onto Dutt, but Dutt suddenly tipped the ladder over taking Webb down onto the ring! Sonjay gets about enough strenghth and he runs and jumps up onto the Turn Buckle, infront of Webb. Dutt signals for his 'Hindu Press', Webb struggling to get up. Sonjay quickly lands the HINDU PRESS!! 1....2....3!! Sonjay wins it.

After the match, Webb challenges Sonjay to another match next month! The catch? He wants a ladder match! Sonjay agrees!

JC Bailey v "The Triple X Sexxx Exxxpress" Sexxxy Eddy

These two guys were CZW Tag Champions together at some point as part of Team Ca$h. Since then, they have went their seprate ways and will meet up in NGW!

Eddy offers a handshake, Bailey reaches forward with his left hand and cheap shots Eddy with the right, sending him to the mat! Bailey immediately stomps Eddy repeatadly. He picks Eddy up and slams him back onto the mat. He grabs Eddy by the hair and pulls him back up, Eddy fights back with some elbows to the stomach. He whips Bailey into the ropes and back body drops him. Bailey gets straight up and runs towards Eddy, he goes for a clothesline, Eddy grabs the arm and locks in an armbar. He holds it on for a while and drops some elbows onto Bailey's arm while still holding onto it. Bailey slowly gets up and Eddy puts him in a wristlock, he quickly moves into a hammerlock. Bailey tries to slap him with his free arm but fails. Eddy goes into a waistlock, Bailey reverses it into another waistlock and hits a German Suplex, he bridges and gets a two! Both men get up and circle eachother. Eddy reached forwards for a test of strength, Bailey refuses and leaves the ring. He searches under the ring and pulls out two chairs. He tries to get Eddy to come on the outside. Eddy runs of the ropes and hits a plancha onto Bailey! He sets up one of the chairs on the ground and suplexes Bailey onto it. He pushes Bailey against the guardrail and Bailey eats some forearms. Eddy throws the chairs into the ring and reaches under the ring. He pulls out a trash can and takes it into the ring with him. Bailey follows and hits a springboard clothesline off the ropes. He picks Eddy up and slams him onto the trash can. He stomps on the ground and yells in his thick southern accent "DOUBLE STOMP!". He goes up stairs and hits a big Double Stomp onto Eddy! He covers him but only gets a two! Bailey pushes the ref, shouting at him that it was a three count. With Bailey's back turned, Eddy rolls him up but only manages to get a two. Eddy takes Bailey down with a shoulderblock and grabs the trash can. He lifts it above his head and the crowd starts and "Eddy" chant! He climbs up the turnbuckle with the trash can and puts it over his head. He then hits the TRASHSAULT! He takes the can off and covers Bailey, 1....2...oh, so close! Eddy picks Bailey up and tries to whip him into the ropes, Bailey reverses it and whips Eddy into the ropes, he takes him down with a back elbow and Bailey goes up top again. He signals for the Bardstown Bam, but Eddy quickly gets up and slams Bailey back down to the mat. Eddy quickly runs towards the ropes and hits the SEXXX ON THE BEACH(split-legged moonsualt)!! He covers Bailey, 1....2....3!! Eddy celebrate by getting a female at ring-side to do a lap dance for him!

The Kings of Pro Wrestling(Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli) v The Blackout(Eddie Kingston and Ruckus)

Hero and Double C attack The Blackout while they are making their entrance and they brawl on the ramp. Kingston piledrives Hero on the ramp and Claudio and Ruckus fight around ring-side. Claudio goes in the ring and Ruckus follows. The referee starts the match and orders Hero and King to get on the apron or the match will be called of. They both slowly make their way down to the ring and get in their respctive corners. Claudio uppercuts Ruckus and lifts him up for a delayed vertical suplex, he waits about half a minute before he finally brings Ruckus crashing down to the mat. He quickly covers him and gets a two he drags Ruckus into the corner where he unloads more uppercuts. He tags in Hero and they mud hole stomp Ruckus in the corner. Hero goes for a DDT, Ruckus gets free from it and slams him. He follows it up with a Standing Shooting Star Press. He hooks Hero's leg but doesn't even get a one count! He picks Hero up and dropkicks him, Hero bails. King jumps down and and tackles Hero, he tries to punch him in the face but he keeps moving. He eventually lays Hero out with a forearm to the face. King pulls a table out from under the ring and places Hero on it. Ruckus climbs up the turnbuckle and hits a 450 SPLASH ON HERO THROUGH THE TABLE!!! Ruckus rolls Hero back in the ring and covers him, Claudio breaks it up just before the ref counts the three! He then puts the boots to Ruckus and King runs in and takes Claudio down with a lariat. Then ref makes them both exit the ring, He starts a double count for Ruckus and Hero. Ruckus gets up and tags in Kingston. He stands over Hero as the crowd chants "Fuck him up, Eddie, fuck him up!". Hero tries to get back up but Eddie keeps on kicking him back down. Hero begs King and he slowly gets himself up by pulling on King's clothes, when he stands up he quickly locks in the CRAVAT, drawing instant laughter from the crowd. Claudio jumps in the ring and puts another cravat on Eddie. While in the cravats, Eddie shakes his head and quickly bursts out of them and hits a double clothesline on them. He puts Hero in a sleeper hold as Claudio leaves the ring. Hero hulks up and breaks out of. Eddie tries to subdue him with some punches, but Hero no-sells them and points at King, he then throws him off the ropes and takes him down with a big boot! With Kingston on the ground, Hero runs off the ropes and lifts his leg like he's gonna hit a legdrop but he quickly drops down and locks in The Hangmans Clutch! Ruckus tries to break it up but Claudio gets in and stops Ruckus with a shoudler block. Hero applies more pressure and Kingston taps out! Hero and Claudio share a manly hug before having a jumping high-five!

NUMBER ONE CONTENDERS MATCH

Roderick Strong v Charlie Haas v "The Canadian Destroyer" Petey Williams

To start off the match Haas offered both Williams and Strong a handshake, but both men just slapped him in the face. Williams throws Haas into the corner and swings Strong into Haas, Williams runs and tries to take Strong down with a powerfull clothesline, but it wasnt enough to take him down. Strong began to fight Williams back with heavy punches to the face of Williams, Haas ran out of the corner and took Strong down with an quick DDT! Williams then got some time to recover from all those punches to the face, but not for long as Haas was soon after him with the suplex. Haas swung Williams into the corner and began to run into him to squish him into the corner, Strong all of a sudden stuck his foot out making Haas fall over. Williams quickly recovered from the corner and wacked Roderick in the face with his knee, Haas ran towards Williams and Williams kicked him in the stomach, Williams tried to land The Canadian Destroyer but he couldnt!! Haas wouldnt let him, Strong ran over and took Williams onto his back with an almighty clothesline. Strong made his way to his feet and grabbed Haas by the hair, and swung him down onto the ring. Williams got himself up and ran over to Strong and landed a Piledriver onto him!! 1....2.. KICKOUT! Haas got backup to his feet and began nailing Williams backwards into the corner, when Williams was fully into the turn buckle. Then Williams pushed Haas back a little bit and ran and kicked him in the face! There was now blood at the scene!! Strong got to his feet and looked down at Haas, then looked up at Williams. Williams smiled and then ran and landed a very quickly executed CANADIAN DESSSTRRRROOOYYYYEEEEERRR!!! 1.......2...... NO! Williams, now mad at Haas for breaking the pin, picks up Haas and Piledriver's him to the ring. Williams the runs and tries to take Strong down who is trying to get up but Strong ducks and Williams takes the ref down! Haas quickly rolls out of the ring, as he see's Williams coming back over to him to beat him up even more. Williams trys to reach over the ropes to pick Haas up but he cant, when about to get out the ring he gets attacked by Strong from behind! Strong swings Williams off the ropes and takes him down with a big boot. Haas now comes back into the ring, with a steel chair! and he bats Strong in the back of the head taking him down! Williams, now back to his feet, begins to punch at Haas. Haas was about to hit Williams with the chair, when Williams flips him over his shoulders making him drop the steel chair. Haas jumps straight back to his feet but is greeted by Williams with... THE CANADIAN DESTROYEEEEEEEEEEEER!! 1...2....3!!

After the match, we see Charlie Haas walking down a corridor, he's punching walls and cursing. He walks into his dressing room and says "Jackie, baby, I've had a rough d....WHAT THE FUCK"! He looked over at the sofa and saw Sexxxy Eddy sitting next to Jackie, clasping her breast! Haas immediately charges towards Eddy and the two start brawling and Jackie splits them up. She pushes Eddy and the cameraman out the room. We can still hear muffled shouting through the door!

TABLES, LADDERS AND CHAIRS - NGW TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIPS

Tough Crazy Bastards(Necro Butcher and "Mr. Insanity" Tony Klein) v The H8 Club(Justice Pain and Nick Gage) v The Rottweilers(Low-Ki and "The Notorious 187" Homcide)

The TCBs came down to huge cheers from the crowd and a big "NECRO" chant! The H8 Club immediate start beating down Necro and Toby without waiting for The Rottweillers! Pain and Necro trade HUGE punches in the ring while Toby and Gage brawl on the outside. Necro throws Pain from the ring through a table that is already set up on the outside. The Rottweilers come on down and they work over Pain on the outside. Necro sees this and scales the turnbuckle, he hits a somersault senton onto them, laying all four guys out! Gage press slams Toby onto the guardrail and whips him into a ladder. Gage climbs the ladder and hits a double axe handle on Toby. Homicide makes his way over and rolls Gage into the ring. They go back-and-forth for a while until Homicide grabs Gage and hits a T-Bone Suplex into the corner! Low-Ki gets in the ring and mud hole stomps Gage in the corner. Justice Pain gets back in the ring and back suplexes Homicide, Pain evades a roundhouse kick from Ki and whips him into the now standing Nick Gage, Gage German Suplexes him and covers him, gets a two. Necro begins to throw the chairs in the ring, all eight of them. He then slides two tables in and enters the ring himself. He unloads some stiff body shots on Gage until Pain comes up behind him and hits him with a backbreaker. Toby climbs onto the apron and goes up top and hits a diving clothesline on Pain! He tries to set up a table but gets hit with some forearms to the head courtesy of Homicide. Homicide whips him into the corner and splashes him. He puts Toby on the turnbuckle and climbs up, he goes for a Super Ace Crusher but Necro sees this and powerbombs Homicide off the turnbuckle and onto a chair! Necro sets up a table and Justice Pain makes his way over and slams Necro through the table. Pain leaves the ring and gets the ladders in with the help of Gage. Low-Ki goes for a tope con hilo onto Pain but misses and lands on the guard rail! Toby and Gage brawl inside the ring and Toby sky highs Gage onto a chair, he covers him and only gets a two! Pain gets back in the ring and clubs the back of Toby. Homicide grabs Pain by the leg, trips him and locks in a Boston Crab, Gage hits Homicide in the face with a chair, breaking up the submission. Necro gets up and charges towards Gage, but Gage back body drops him over the apron and onto the concrete floor! Both Pain and Gage go to work on Toby, beating him down with a number of chair shots. Low-Ki slowly crawls back into the ring and weakly elbown Pain in the head, Pain quickly turns around and levels him with a chair shot! Homicide gets up and sets up the ladder in the ring. Pain and Gage make their way towards Homicide and Gage piledrives him onto a chair while Pain sets up a table. They both move their sites onto Toby again and continue to beat him with chairs. Pain picks Toby up, he begins to climb the ladder, dragging Toby up with him. When they get to the top of the ladder, Gage holds it still while Pain gets Toby onto his shoudlers. From there he hits the PAIN THRILLER FROM THE LADDER THROUGH A TABLE!! Gage moves his brother, Justice Pain, and quickly covers Toby. 1......2........3!!! The first ever Tag Champions are The H8 Club!

ELIMINATION MATCH FOR NGW WORLD HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPIONSHIP

Austin Aries v "The Samoa Submission Machine" Samoa Joe v "Mr. Wrestling" Kevin Steen v Super Dragon

Joe and Aries go on the apron as Steen and Dragon start. Steen puts Super Dragon in a hammerlock, Super Dragon powers out of it and punches Steen in the face. Steen punches Dragon back and they trade wickedly stiff forearms. Steen catches Dragon with a Thrust Kick and Dragon bails. Steen hits a somersault senton onto Dragon over the ropes. Steen rolls Dragon back in and Dragon tags Joe in. Joe immediately palm strikes the hell out of Steen, Steen comeback with some punches to the temple until Joe grabs him and hits a belly-to-belly suplex. He covers him, 1.....2...kick out! Joe picks Steen up and Steen tries to fight it and gets an advantage over Joe. He gets Joe into position for the Package Piledriver but Joe somehow manages to power out of it and whips Steen into the corner. He puts Steen on the turnbuckle, gets him into position and hits the MUSCLEBUSTER! He follows it up with the Triangle Choke and Steen ahs no alternative other than to tap. After tempting it for about twenty seconds, Steen eventually taps out! Austin Aries gets in the ring.

Aries runs for Joe and finds himself flying through the sky over his shoulders, Dragon runs for Joe and starts kicking him and kicking him, untill Joe pushes Dragon back.. and then headbutts him down! Aries then comes along and gets Joe in a headlock. Joe is about to tapp.. but will he? Joe anxious to tapp out.. Dragon then pushes Aries off and Joe falls to the ground. Dragon then gets Samoa Joe into the position of the Curb Stomp.. here it is.. CURB STOMP!! Aries then runs and pushes Dragon off, Aries then climbs the turn buckle, and lands the 450 Splash onto Samoa Joe! Aries then kicks Dragon to the face and makes the cover to Joe.. 1...2..3!!

Aries ran for Dragon taking him down with a clothesline, both men now tired out they both began punching each other while on the ground. Dragon then suddenly got to his feet and kicked Aries in the face, making him bleed! Aries then got up, wiped the blood and then nailed Dragon 5 times then swung him into the turn buckle. Dragon ran back out and tried to take Aries down with a clothesline! Aries got up after and ran towards Dragon again and Dragon took him out with a backbreaker. Aries made his way to his feet once again, and swung to take Dragon down but Dragon ducked and landed an suplex taking Aries down once again!! Both men got to their feet again and started hammering at each other, Aries got back too his feet and ran for Dragon and Dragon tripped him over head first into the corner, Dragon then landed THE CURB STOMP ONTO THE BOTTOM TURN BUCKLE!!! 1.....2...3!!! Dragon wins, Dragon begins to celebrate holding his new title up into the air. Suddenly a figure appears behind Super Dragon and nails him with a chair! Its AMERICAN DRAGON!! American Dragon picks up the mic and says a few words; "Super Dragon, Next Generation Wrestling opens, you have to be number one dont you? Well.. you wont be for long. You have allways wanted to steal the Dragon out of my name, and you allways wanted to steal the awesomeness out of the American in my name, well.. you havent this time. You messed the star that was 'American Dragon' up, you messed 'The Dragons' tag team up, well. Now, i'm going to mess you up! As I am going to bring the star back that was the American Dragon, AFTER I have take you down.. so at the next NGW show, me, you and Petey Williams for that 'Title' of yours!!" American Dragon drops the mic and kicks Super Dragon to the face before leaving the ring.

End of show!

Hope you enjoyed it, Jord and I have had a blast writing it. Thanks for reading

[Guest Jord]

Comments are much appreciated, and note: This show was written in one day! It was a rush but we did it.

[ZAK416]

Another diary that reaks of awesomeness! Damn I cant pick winners anymore. Can't wait to see Eddy/ Haas and Dragon/Dragon could be some killer matches.

Edit: Wow this really does reak of awesomeness if it was written in one day. I really cant wait for a show that yous take your time on.

Edited December 11, 2005 by ZAK416

[Guest Jord]

Thanks alot man, even if I say myself I think the Eddy/ Haas match will be great,

EDIT: Thanks even more, lol. The show we will be taking time on is the next, as its one show a month!

Edited December 11, 2005 by Jord

[caucasianheat]

Alright, since no one seemed to get the message when TGC was handing out warnings for the non-stop whoring that went on in all of your CZW diaries, let me put it here in writing for your privelage.

<center>STOP POSTWHORING IN EACH OTHER'S DIARIES. IF YOU HAVE NOTHING CONSTRUCTIVE TO ADD, DON'T BOTHER POSTING</center>

Consider this your only heads-up before warnings start getting thrown out.

[Guest Jord]

Your not allowed to post in each other threads? Eiji told me about this before..

[TGC]

Your not allowed to post in each other threads? Eiji told me about this before..

You're allowed to POST in each other's threads, you're not allowed to POSTWHORE.

What's the difference? Read The Rules Of The Dome. Considering that each of you were warned, and in Eiji's case multiple times, for postwhoring, I'd assume you know what the difference is already. If not, then the only problem ya'll are going to have is what board to get banned from next.

TGC

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

Hold up there TCG, he wasn't post-whoring, this is a split diary, it's mine and Jord's. He was simply thanking Zak for his kind comments.

Edited December 12, 2005 by Eiji Ezaki

[probablyoliver]

It's still POSTWHORING no matter who's diary it is. You're not allowed to whore in anyone's diaries, not even your own.

And to make this post worthwhile; it took two people to write that show? GODDAMN!

Edited December 12, 2005 by Father Ollie Beak

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

It's still POSTWHORING no matter who's diary it is. You're not allowed to whore in anyone's diaries, not even your own.

And to make this post worthwhile; it took two people to write that show? GODDAMN!

Edited December 12, 2005 by Eiji Ezaki

[probablyoliver]

How is it sucking up? I was pointing out a fact because you're too retarded to understand that postwhoring counts even if it's your own diary.

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

So, you didn't actually read the show? I knew it.

[probablyoliver]

I did read the show. You edited while I was typing numbnuts.

The layout of the show put me off reading, it didn't make me want to read it, it was cluttered together, hard to navigate, not sure what was match and what was promo.

Subject knowledge is pretty low, some of the moves you had some people knock out weren't like thier character at all, and you the matches seemed very generic with no real psychology or characterisation.

Promo's were poor, again, subject knowledge was poor. For example, the bit with Haas & Eddy brawling because Eddy was perving on Gayda. Haas wouldn't be one to shout "What the fuck!", it's completley out of character for him. Also he seemed very bland. Also Gayda wouldn't let Eddy just grope her like that, Eddy's very scrawny, Jackie would have pushed him off at least.

Titles being challenged for on the very first show is sucky and gives your titles no pretige. Why do Joe, Aries, Steen or Super Dragon want the NGW title, is there any reason to have it? Not if it's on the first show. There's no chance to build up to it.

Matches showed little charisma. There was no emotion for the wrestlers, it was just move-move-move-reversal-move-pin, there was nothing in there to make me want to support one wrestler or one team.

Overall it wasn't an awful show, just very generic, there was nothing that made me want to read, and nothing that makes me want to check it out next time.

An apology would be nice

[Bushmeister]

I've been meaning to comment on your diaries for a while, and now your sucky reaction to a MODERATOR'S comments has sparked enough interest for me to actually post.

First of all, your roster. I hate it. You have made NO conscious mental effort in picking it out: instead, you have taken the "top dogs" of CZW and ROH and stuck them in the same fed. Zero imagination, zero interest. This whole "dream-roster" type of deal is boring and done so many times it's not even funny. Yes, I know a lot of people mark out for Nate Webb and Samoa Joe and Kevin Steen and Tough Crazy Bastards (I like to believe that I'm the biggest Necro Butcher mark there is, for crying out loud), but that is not a reason to build a lazy-ass roster chock full of the guys. Same goes with filling the roster based on their EWR stats. Again, it just comes off as unimaginative and lazy. Where are the Rick Feinbergs and Hellaware Assassins of the fed? Where are the Dunns and the Marcos'? 97% of real-life indy feds use a crapload of, well, crap talent. That's why there's over 4000 workers in the RaveX updates: use them! Book a varied undercard, something that's pretty much a staple in any given indy.

Next, the show. Chris Hero sounds nothing like Hero when he is on commentary. Neither of these guys could sell me a wrestling show as written by you. And shouldn't the ring announcer do the introduction spiel, as opposed to DVD commentators?

Generico vs Shark Boy: you build up for the BRAINBUSTAAAAAAH~!, but in the wrong way. Real-life, Generico would never go for the BRAINetc. that early. Reason? Not believeable. Yes, Generico isn't one of the most adherent guys to ring psychology, but it's a complicated finisher, especially if you go for the turnbuckle variant, and hence you need to pummel the opponent up good to finally land it. Also, why would you do a faceoff so late in the match, ESPECIALLY if it comes after a fast technical wrestling sequence (I take it means the standard Headlock Takedown-Hammerlock-Kipup-Dodge-Reversal-combos), it makes no sense. In the beginning, yes, to get the crowd going. In the end? Nah.

Dutt vs Webb: grammar isn't the writer's strong point. I suggest writing the match out in Notepad first, then running it through Word. It saves the reader a lot of annoyance when he doesn't have to skim through so many errors. Also, punctuation. "Sonjay then sommersaulted over the top rope taking Webb to the concreat floor, Webb and Sonjay slowly made their way to their feet, Webb started the series of punches to the face of Sonjay, as they both got up the punches got harder." <--- This is bad, because it puts as much emphasis on the series of punches as it does the Somersault Plancha that Dutt performed. Seriously, which would the crowd pop more for? Use punctuation, bold and whatnot to highlight crazy shit like this, especially if it's the point of the match (and in the case of Webb vs Dutt, what else could be the point of it?) Webb challenges Dutt to a Ladder match next month... But this was basically a Ladder match, wasn't it? They came into play before even half of the match was through, and played a pretty big part too. That's not good booking, and makes the Ladder match seem like nothing.

Bailey vs Eddy: See Dutt vs Webb for grammar. The match itself is much more coherent than the two prior to it, and I can imagine it happening especially after viewing their ToD4 bout. Easily the most readable match of the show so far: it has no extravagant or impossible moments, and has a nice, fast-paced ending with signature moves aplenty.

Hero/Castagnoli vs Kingston/Ruckus: so Hero gets Piledriven onto steel, and then nosells it by coming down to the ringside? I'd expect the heels to use the opportunity to double-team on Castagnoli while Hero is out on the floor, but instead he just comes down with Kingston like there was no neck-snapping move done at all. The first time Hero gets into the ring, he's perfectly fine, and Ruckus can't even get a one count. The man was Piledriven on the floor! Surely even the worst worker would sell that somewhat. And Hero is far from the worst. Then Hero is suddenly put through a table on the outside of the ring: what the hell is Claudio doing, picking his nose? Bad mistake right there, why wouldn't he come out and help Hero? The ending is awkward as fuck as well: Hero applying the Hangman's Clutch to an opponent... Who's on his back... And having waited for Hero to do the whole Hulk Hogan routine... And who hasn't taken any damage beyond a Double Cravate (which he broke out of) and a Big Boot. There is no way in hell Kingston should go down, unless this was WCW.

Threeway: why have a #1 Contendership Match when you don't even have a champion yet? What have these people done in the fed to qualify for a title shot anyway? Why didn't they qualify for the championship match? Crummy booking once again. Also, I noticed here that you switch from the past tense to the present mid-match, which is a pretty big eyesore in my books and also makes the match flow not-so-smoothly. The segment afterwards also suffers from the same mistake. As for the match? Nothing stands out, really. But see what you did here with the Canadian Destroyer? You played it up as a standout part of the match, which is good. I'm not saying you should give the whole CAPS LOCK AND MORE EXCLAMATION MARKS THAN YOU CAN WAVE A STICK AT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! treatment to every big move (in fact, I'd advice against the use of so many exclamation marks. Makes it seem quite stupid, if you catch my drift!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

The tag match: the "no rhyme or reason"-type booking of this match kills my interest right away. Why a TLC match right away? I don't really see why you want to desensitize the crowd to the weapon spots so early: these three teams could work a brutal, stiff and crazy match even without tables, ladders or chairs. Pain and Gage dominated the match unnecessarily, although it pretty much fits with Gage's image nowadays. Still, boring to have only two teams out of three take all the punishment (even if two of those men are Toby and Necro)

The championship fourway: see the #1 Contender. Why do these four men get a title shot? Now, I just realized that you have an intriguing setup here, with two long-time champions (Joe & Super Dragon, in ROH & PWG respectively) and also the men who de-throned them (Aries & Steen), but sadly you don't play up to this at all. The first fall is Samoa Joe dominating Kevin Steen: fair enough, that could happen. But then, Samoa Joe, a man who has been taken all the way to 60 minutes multiple times in championship matches, falls to a combination of... What? A headlock, the Curb Stomp, and the 450 Splash? If this was WWF No Mercy, then maybe yes. However, it is not, and this just makes both the Curb Stomp and 450 Splash look ridiculously powerful, which they really aren't in real-life. True, the 450 Splash is Aries' finisher, and the Curb Stomp is one of the most over moves in Dragon's arsenal, but they should not be able to take Samoa Joe down without a massive beatdown beforehand. Same in the final fall: the Curb Stomp comes off as the Jesus move to finish off all comers. Yes, done onto the lower turnbuckle it's even nastier. But kind of a non-flashy ending, don't you think? You'd really want something in the middle of the ring.

American Dragon's run-in makes no sense, as I could never see Danielson swinging a chair. Come out and trash talk, yes. But succumb to that level? Nah, he'd rather make the challenge and wrestle it out next month. And BTW, American Dragon gets a title shot for just coming out and handing Super Dragon his ass with a steel chair? That makes absolutely no fucking sense. Why didn't anyone else come down and get a title shot in the similar manner if it was that damn easy?

All in all, I did not enjoy the show. I hope you can improve for the next one, but I doubt it. This is just a boring, useless diary with the exact same wrestlers and matches that have been done to death already, without any kind of a personal touch or an original idea.

:thumbsdown:

[Guest Eiji Ezaki]

Generico vs Shark Boy: you build up for the BRAINBUSTAAAAAAH~!, but in the wrong way. Real-life, Generico would never go for the BRAINetc. that early. Reason? Not believeable. Yes, Generico isn't one of the most adherent guys to ring psychology, but it's a complicated finisher, especially if you go for the turnbuckle variant, and hence you need to pummel the opponent up good to finally land it. Also, why would you do a faceoff so late in the match, ESPECIALLY if it comes after a fast technical wrestling sequence (I take it means the standard Headlock Takedown-Hammerlock-Kipup-Dodge-Reversal-combos), it makes no sense. In the beginning, yes, to get the crowd going. In the end? Nah.