1) ---GOOD POINTS---
Effective use of background renders, and good cut for the main render.
---BAD POINTS---
Nothing major, except the way the grid is designed, it hurts my eyes a little. It's also a touch dark for a backing effect... The text is a little plain, but again, not a major issue.
2) ---GOOD POINTS---
EXCELLENT use of the scanlines with the grungy background. Makes the whole piece look much better. Once again, the render works with the background, although it's more subdued, which I like. Good glow on "Edge" as well.
---BAD POINTS---
The other text looks wierdly spaced, especially "The" and "Rated" being too squashed, and "Superstar" being too far apart. The lack of a border of any kind (unless there's a light one I'm not seeing, in which case, I apologize) lets the background down a little.
OVERALL: The Edge one is my favourite, although the lack of a border is noticeable... d ^_^ b