Ive wrote a song

[Infinte Fire]

i've wrote a song to go with an acoustic song i made up, so yeh... its not meant to be cool

Big Fat Cow [Download - 1.3MB]

[Stevie B]

Heh, made me chuckle.

[Bigal]

It hurt my ears .

Seriously though, it did provoke a smile. Which is an achievement in itself .

[Infinte Fire]

yeh.. my high pitched screaming is hard on the ears

[Guest The Real Deal]

Tis very funny Shaun.

[alternateyou]

Absolutely HORRIBLE!

If it was supposed to be funny, at the least you should've made it well written. The guitar part starts off alright, but is soon engulfed by the drunken cowboy "singing" extremely loudly and just sounds like you're hitting one string. So if it were say re-recorded, re-mixed, and actually no, nothing could make this decent.

Keep tryin'.

[Guest Wrestling_Man]

Made me chuckle, that made my day.

[Infinte Fire]

Absolutely HORRIBLE!

If it was supposed to be funny, at the least you should've made it well written. The guitar part starts off alright, but is soon engulfed by the drunken cowboy "singing" extremely loudly and just sounds like you're hitting one string. So if it were say re-recorded, re-mixed, and actually no, nothing could make this decent.

Edited May 22, 2005 by Infinte Fire

[Kaney]

Way to take criticism constructively :thumbsup:

[Infinte Fire]

meh, didnt ask for criticism :thumbsup:

Edited May 22, 2005 by Infinte Fire

[Kaney]

Yeah, you kinda did when you posted it. If you didn't want criticism then you should have put it in your blog or somewhere else where no one looks.

Stop being a dick.

Edited May 22, 2005 by Kaney

[alternateyou]

Yeah, stop being a dick!

[Gongsun Zan]

And you stop being a postwhore

Edited May 22, 2005 by Gongsun Zan

[apsham]

I didn't like it myself, but please don't call me a moron just because. Kaney is quite right.

[britneyspearsisgod]

The sheer idea that anyone would fine this at all funny makes me wonder what it takes to be funny.

The words were too out of synch with the song. The words were not funny. The song was not funny. I have had shits that were funnier. In fact, it's a fair bet that Hugar has cracked better jokes than this.

I'm sorry, but that was the most shittest thing I have ever listened to in my life. I wouldn't even give you criticism, besides to never ever do it again. It's just... urgh. I mean... urgh.

[The Sultan of Swank]

I liked that. Cept for the high pitched-ness thing battle cry.