Loves Suicide

[craig]

Front cover for my book, i want to get it to 10/10 so tell me what to do but the pink for the font is essential

[therockbox]

It may be 'essential', but it looks horrible - the choice of font and the shade of pink looks extremely out of place, plus its blurry. What's the background supposed to be?

3/10

[craig]

the background isn't spose to 'be' anything just out there and eye catching

[therockbox]

Not really eye catching at all.

[Cactus Drags]

That's....godawful. There's no definition to it, besides the text I suppose, but that's not a good thing. Why does it have to be pink? The font choice doesn't match the...random blur of the background either. It doesn't make a convincing book cover, anyway. And since when did the author design the front cover of the book?

[Herr Matzat]

there is something about it that i can´t explain . . . but it dossent make me hate it, wich i should, becaus it lookes like something i usualy would hate, so i´ll go and beat myself to senses now. later

[Docpepper]

I dunno guys I'm sort of liking this don't know why though .

the main think I dislike is the border make it black and i think this could work as a book cover . I've seen worse but the use of colors imo is what makes this so eyecatching. Graphically it's mediocre but it serves the purpose of what you using it for. A book cover. The background being blurred and the vibrant color of the text balnce each other out

if this was a book cover and I was walkign down the isle my eye would immediately focus on that cover.

[Guest [ Tyler ]]

When I think of the word love I sure as hell don't think of something like that. I suggest redoing it...and since it's love's suicide I'd manip a rose so it looks dead.

[Skummy]

I'd stick an apostrophe between the "e" and the "s" for a start, or just change it to "Love Is".

It might catch my eye if I saw it, but I certainly wouldn't buy it. If anything, that cover would turn me off.

[craig]

two more ideas

[craig]

anyway another idea suggested by a friend

he suggested Barbed Wire as a hold backand struggle and pain of homosexuality which i have to admit i like alot and want to keep

[Guest [ Tyler ]]

No...the barb wire looks bad on it. :S

[K]

Take it slow Don Juan.

[Cactus Drags]

You're getting worse with each effort.

[craig]

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[livid]

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Edited May 8, 2005 by Livid

[TOG]

Most people who would take the time to actually read them aren't going to buy books on a cover, there's no reason for you to even be trying to get a 10/10. Especially when it appears you're not especially talented, and the more talented artists of this forum don't get 10/10s.

However, having a title that makes sense, now that's what would be impressive.

[craig]

that title make sense to the book

[Summers]

I actually liked the original one.

[craig]

6 more ideas